Apr 20, 2013 23:33
vid: baby says, the hour, ohshit a vid, vidding (no seriously vidding)
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I really like how you started near the end of the story, so there's kind of a "how we got to this point" effect.
Your use of motion!! Freddie being turned spun around by the owner of El Paradis at 1:45 - the sense of disorientation!! Kiki's face in general!!
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