Alright, folks, this is it, the final chapter. :) the porn party couldn’t continue forever, and everyone’s packing up to go home. Sad but true
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“Well. That might be hasty, come to think of it. Couple ways in which you’re cherry, yet.”
He fought back a laugh over Xander’s wide-eyed expression. He could practically hear him puzzling out how else two bodies might fuck in his head.
“Never you mind. That’s advanced cherry-picking. You should stay at the shallow end of the pool for a ways yet.”
Xander snickered. “This was the shallow end?”
Loved that. Loved the bits of Angel.
This was such a wonderful and fun series. You are so right that it is sort of a piece in amber, but okay, I can hope that when you have a bit of free--haha!--time again you might be tempted to do the spander in the future as a separate and related series like with WBD? Because when you started talking about Spike's issues, I could so picture a very interesting reunion. Sorry!
LOL. I expected someone to ask me for it regardless of what I said but...et tu, Brutus?
I totally understand what you're saying, there's some interesting possibility there, but...I don't feel motivated to dig into it. with the WBD sequel, I felt like I wasn't done with them. these boys...I feel as though I am peacefully, comfortably finished with them. I really like this feeling of euphoria and...the absence of reality between these two.
I don't think I want to monkey with that. but you know, if maybe a bunny bites me...but I really don't think it will.
I loved the cherry-picking convo. I wrote that part long before all of the rest of this chapter.
I've enjoyed this story so much and as sad as it was, I'm pleased Spike & Xander went their separate ways. He's just 16! But with a lot of good experience he can take home with him. I just hope he doesn't get into any trouble.
I'd love to see a story from the POV of someone in the group either when Xander was first introduced or when it was clear he was more special than Spike's other boys. Any character would be interesting.
It must feel good to finish this WIP. I was a little concerned that you might get into some sort of ostrich accident and leave us hanging. :-)
I'm so glad you liked my ending! I think it was the only way it really could be, unless I wanted to derail myself entirely from reality and who these characters are...which I hope I don't ever do.
I just hope he doesn't get into any trouble. my mind touched on that, whether or not Xander could use this knowledge wisely. haha, he is *16*. but we'll pretend he does, k? k.
It must feel good to finish this WIP. I was a little concerned that you might get into some sort of ostrich accident and leave us hanging. :-) lmao. that's always a possibility.
I'd love to see a story from the POV of someone in the group either when Xander was first introduced or when it was clear he was more special than Spike's other boys. Any character would be interesting.oh, that is interesting! I'll see what comes when I think about that. especially since I kind of fast-forwarded through that part from Xander's tipsy pov. that way I won't just be rehashing. *thinks* might be a while before I get to it, but eventually I'll come back to this 'verse
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I was thinking that Xander could get into trouble by thinking he knows more than he does at a club or something. Especially if he tried to pick up an older guy thinking he'd be like Spike.
Save the ostrich accident for when you really get behind in something. How can people argue with that excuse? It's gold.
aaaawwwwwwww its ovverrrr? god that was perfect, just wow *snuffles and clings* but but its over? its like the only thing i been reading in weeks! what am i gonna read now? and angel/linds? you know i'm sooo down with that toy harder *sends bunny to nip at your heels* awesome awesome story honey, just *aches* ima miss it sooo
so very kidding! I'm flattered that you loved my porny little thing that much, honey.
you know what's funny is that I hardly ever read Angel/Lindsey. or Lindsey paired with anyone. I don't know why, since I like him as a character. but this idea of addressing all that hinting I did that someday, Angel would fuck Lindsey into the mattress...it nags at me. it's niggling, and I have no specific bunny but...man I want to be a fly on that wall, which means I'll probably write that one.
thank you, babe. I'm glad you loved my little story.
yeah sorry I vetoed the spander. I know it's tempting, but I don't think I could do it well, because I'm just not into writing what happens. but I love your idea of Willow and Oz for a ficlet! I hadn't even thought of that. they are kind of the exception, aren't they? I always felt like they had a strong bond that could accomodate almost anything, if they worked it out. it would be interesting to write maybe how they got into this whole thing. now, you want it porny, not porny, or you don't care either way? if it's porny I think there might need to be some femmeslash, because of Willow.... Just let me know.
You know what I'd really like to see? Someone very invisible that goes to school with Xander, like Andrew or Jonathan, who had actually been at the music festival too, although Xander never noticed them. And so they've seen this remarkable transformation take place in him, and they can't stop thinking about him now. It wouldn't even have to be requited, although it would be lovely to see Xander have a little someone at home... who knows how long a high school romance will last, but two years is a long time... it'd be nice to see Xander feeling fine about moving on, and not pining after Spike.
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He fought back a laugh over Xander’s wide-eyed expression. He could practically hear him puzzling out how else two bodies might fuck in his head.
“Never you mind. That’s advanced cherry-picking. You should stay at the shallow end of the pool for a ways yet.”
Xander snickered. “This was the shallow end?”
Loved that. Loved the bits of Angel.
This was such a wonderful and fun series. You are so right that it is sort of a piece in amber, but okay, I can hope that when you have a bit of free--haha!--time again you might be tempted to do the spander in the future as a separate and related series like with WBD? Because when you started talking about Spike's issues, I could so picture a very interesting reunion. Sorry!
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I totally understand what you're saying, there's some interesting possibility there, but...I don't feel motivated to dig into it. with the WBD sequel, I felt like I wasn't done with them. these boys...I feel as though I am peacefully, comfortably finished with them. I really like this feeling of euphoria and...the absence of reality between these two.
I don't think I want to monkey with that. but you know, if maybe a bunny bites me...but I really don't think it will.
I loved the cherry-picking convo. I wrote that part long before all of the rest of this chapter.
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I'd love to see a story from the POV of someone in the group either when Xander was first introduced or when it was clear he was more special than Spike's other boys. Any character would be interesting.
It must feel good to finish this WIP. I was a little concerned that you might get into some sort of ostrich accident and leave us hanging. :-)
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I just hope he doesn't get into any trouble.
my mind touched on that, whether or not Xander could use this knowledge wisely. haha, he is *16*. but we'll pretend he does, k? k.
It must feel good to finish this WIP. I was a little concerned that you might get into some sort of ostrich accident and leave us hanging. :-)
lmao. that's always a possibility.
I'd love to see a story from the POV of someone in the group either when Xander was first introduced or when it was clear he was more special than Spike's other boys. Any character would be interesting.oh, that is interesting! I'll see what comes when I think about that. especially since I kind of fast-forwarded through that part from Xander's tipsy pov. that way I won't just be rehashing. *thinks* might be a while before I get to it, but eventually I'll come back to this 'verse ( ... )
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Save the ostrich accident for when you really get behind in something. How can people argue with that excuse? It's gold.
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ah. yeah. one of the many ways Xander could get himself in trouble.
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god that was perfect, just wow
*snuffles and clings*
but but its over?
its like
the only thing i been reading in weeks! what am i gonna read now?
and angel/linds?
you know i'm sooo down with that
toy harder *sends bunny to nip at your heels*
awesome awesome story honey, just *aches* ima miss it sooo
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so very kidding! I'm flattered that you loved my porny little thing that much, honey.
you know what's funny is that I hardly ever read Angel/Lindsey. or Lindsey paired with anyone. I don't know why, since I like him as a character. but this idea of addressing all that hinting I did that someday, Angel would fuck Lindsey into the mattress...it nags at me. it's niggling, and I have no specific bunny but...man I want to be a fly on that wall, which means I'll probably write that one.
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yeah sorry I vetoed the spander. I know it's tempting, but I don't think I could do it well, because I'm just not into writing what happens. but I love your idea of Willow and Oz for a ficlet! I hadn't even thought of that. they are kind of the exception, aren't they? I always felt like they had a strong bond that could accomodate almost anything, if they worked it out. it would be interesting to write maybe how they got into this whole thing. now, you want it porny, not porny, or you don't care either way? if it's porny I think there might need to be some femmeslash, because of Willow.... Just let me know.
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:::has completely lurked, because I'm a bad commenter, but loves the story:::
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that's an interesting idea. I don't know how good I am with writing Andrew or Jonathon, but I'll chew on it a while.
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