fic: give it up [b.a.p; yongchan; nc-17]

[thatdayismine]

give it up
b.a.p; yongguk/himchan; nc-17; 2500
“you’ll be begging soon enough,” yongguk growls into his ear, all hot breath and deep, husky voice. pwp. model au.

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[themadpoker]

In honour of your posts showing up on my flist again I will today be performing one (1) liveblog! Let's get this fic on the road!

Working with Kim Himchan was, as per usual, aggravating. Yongguk, in his three years in the industry, had never met someone so snotty and pretentious and stuck up. He’d spent the entirety of the shoot telling himself that the arrogant little smirk on Himchan’s face could easily be punched off but that that was perhaps not the best method of solving his annoyance.

Does he actually hate this dude? Is this in an indication of sublimated attraction? Will they bang? I am placing my bets on the latter for now. 8*)

Something about supressed sexual tension.

That was quick confirmation! I am a future telling winner! :D

It’s a matter of seconds, once Yongguk’s chatting with some up and comer, laughing as loud as he can that Himchan spots him. He doesn’t even hide his dismay, sneering a bit in disgust. Yongguk has half a mind to throw his wine glass at him, soil his pretty white shirt.Geez bro, did he murder

[thatdayismine]

I CANNOT STOP LISTENING TO SOMEBODY I USED TO KNOW. THAT SONG IS SO FANTASTIC, I CAN'T LIVE. I AM STILL NOT SICK OF IT. LIKE, WHAT IS LIFE EVEN.

also, thankyou for your comments. i should maybe enlighten himchan about eighteenth century dress as well but perhaps another time, when he is not so, uh, preoccupied.

you should become a fortune teller tbh.

[pervertparade]

"It’s a matter of seconds, once Yongguk’s chatting with some up and comer, laughing as loud as he can that Himchan spots him." - nae far down. i presume you meant 'before' rather than 'that'? also, there should be a comma after 'can'. actually, just rephrase the sentence thus: "It's a matter of seconds before Himchan spots him, WHILE Yongguk's chatting with some new-comer, laughing as loud as he can." it also feels like you've tried to blend up-and-coming (which, strictly speaking, is an adjective and not a noun) with new-comer, and thus made an awkward compound word that doesn't actually work in either context, so yeah

[thatdayismine]

n_____n thankyou bb! will go fix up some of the stuff now :)

[agriimony]

CRYING. D8

[thatdayismine]

oh no D: no crying!!

[acornmama]

wonderful fantastic life decisions. Filthy porn is good and you write it exceedingly well. The sexy talk is especially well done.

[thatdayismine]

thankyou so much;;;

[hotpixel]

useless late comment whatever. STILL CRYING OVER THIS. FROM ALL MY RAW PINK PARTS.