bits and pieces.

[that_september]

Things that make sense. Things that don't. Bits of what I want to say, pieces of what I don't. Beginnings. No endings, not yet.

number them

And you number the last days.

1. She stops breathing on purpose.

“So we’ll be ready,” she says-coughs. “It’s like a fire drill.”

You sit awake beside her long into the night. Try not to blink as you watch the

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[that_september]

Oh, thank you so much!

[orehime]

Oh, I WANT MOAR! MOAR I tell you! Especially Drew & Josie...

[that_september]

Aw! Thank you so much. Glad you like it. :D

[nocturnes]

“Your mouth is a semicolon,” she laughs, tangled in wires on top of you. “You taste like an ampersand.”

“Your mouth is an ellipsis,” you murmur, “and Lord, woman-I will miss your punctuation.”

This is so, so good. ♥

And:

“Try to remember that the difference between anxiety and exhilaration is a breath.” She stands on tiptoe, kisses his cheek.

I love your characters, and your imagery is breath-taking. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

[that_september]

Aww, thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. ♥

[darkenedsakura]

Worst commenter ever, totally forgot to mention that I read these and why are you so good with words!?

We shall talk more tomorrow. Ahaha I think I am going to attempt studying and not being a crazy person atm. Sigh. Edit - and yeah, I'm totally just randomly stalking old journal entries or something, I don't even know. 8D