"Walking Away" (somewhat chenzel?)

[that_girl65]

Title: Walking Away
Summary: I realized that this is vague enough to be chenzel, though it's based on my own experiences.

Her chest rises and falls rhythmically with each breath that she takes and I marvel at how effortless her beauty is, even in her sleep.  My thumb traces gently over her eyebrows and her eyelids twitch, aqua pools hidden behind the

Comments

[jaymes_maxwell]

Gorgeous and heart-breaking.

[grumbello]

Must you make this so sad? :) I mean, you want me to be crying all over your review? :P

You're a bit of a poet mate. Very soulful as if reading from her soul and not mind. It was well done.

Great little speil mate
Stay safe
Grumbello

[elphies_galinda]

Wow... This is just...wow.... This could definitely be Chenzel. Great Chenzel, at that. ^_^

Umm...Grumbello pimped you out, lol. I had to come check your LJ because I'm always looking for stuff to read. I haven't exactly looked at your other fics (I should really get ready for school...) but I definitely will now that I've read this!!

[that_girl65]

Yay! Thank you! Pimping = success.