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Jul 18, 2008 22:30

Title: You're Awake
Pairing: Padma Patil/Zacharias Smith
Prompt: a gentleman in closer detail
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 519
Summary: Padma gets drunk, Zacharias takes her home, breakfast follows.
Author's Notes: The second.
Link to Prompt Table: table is here

( Sloppy drunk girls and fresh bacon )

pg-13, fanfiction, rarepair_shorts, harry potter, zacharias, padma, zacharias/padma

Comments 2

chimbomba July 23 2008, 06:36:57 UTC

Hahahahaha. I love how you wrote a fic about how nothing happened, that makes my day. xD And it is very typical of both Zacharias and Padma, I think, so extra points for that.

thimble_kiss December 31 2008, 16:24:50 UTC

So, I stumbled upon this through random (desperate) blog-googling for Zacharias fic and was very happy to read it and then find the previous scene in the series through your table. This is so wry and cute! I love how level-headed Padma is here, Zacharias's abrasiveness and the evidence that he's still got a gentlemanly side, and that the dialogue is so no-b.s. on both their parts (which makes it very entertaining to follow). Also loved the tone between Padma and Parvati. I hope you'll be inspired to continue it. :)