[oneshot] asphyxia.

[tharae]

asphyxia.
and he is pale, pale, pale and porcelain perfect -- jin sometimes thinks that it is harder to take those longer, deeper breaths. they all come out so wrong. jin sometimes thinks that he is suffocating.
johnny's entertainment.
jin/kame. 2,025 words.

a/n- unbeta'd. (: there are no capitals for stylistic effect. whether it is actually stylish or

Comments

[tharae]

salfkja thank you tillyyy (((:

Glad that you enjoyed. Your opinion means lots to me :D:D

[azluv]

great one shot!!! its totally different from the others fics i've ever read!! keep writing!!

[tharae]

Thank you! I aspire to be different. xD

[timedhappiness]

are you sarah... alyssa's sarah? Your writing sounds so familiar ._. but I might be wrong on this X: It's definitely stylistic in an awesome way!!! I couldn't enjoy it in the sense that Jin wasn't enjoying it but it was worth the read. Just everything... Kame, the partying with himself part, red red red, etc. ... everything down to the last line. It was so beautifully written. Each word (pattern) etc. was soooo good T_T

The last line has left me breathless. x: bleh T___T

sorry this is totally incoherent LOL

[tharae]

I think I'm a different Sarah. (:

sdlkfjs thank you for the comment and incoherency is good. Yes. :D:D

[a_jin]

this is beautiful poetry to the end of the obcessing soul of one desperate lover describing his so...ever so angelic yet devilish lover...how do I describe it? You put it into words..You are genious! Wish akame knew of this..they would be so ...flattering...'cause their love story..if it ever true...esp kame's poisonous attraction..is perfectly embrace in 1 word asphyxia. No it's not wierd, not psycho..the only psychos are kame's crazy lovers...jin & kame's, akame's fandom..that's all..that including me me me...thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts!!!

[tharae]

I'm glad you enjoyed~ I've been working on this fic for ages now, and I'm glad to have posted it up (finally o:). Anyway, thanks for reading. :D:D

alsfjlas I don't think akame would be flattered at all. More like slightly disturbed. xD

[fireflychen]

*_________*Omg, I've never read something like this. Beautifully written! ♥

[tharae]

Thank you for reading! This is one of my many attempts at being original. :D