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[thallas_wake]

 CHAPTER 3: MADNESS COMES FORTH

"Oh My God Carol, what the hell happened here"

The scene that lay in front of Tony, was not something he had seen before, not up close an personal anyway. There were sections of body parts lying on numerous trolleys and trays throughout the tent. They had yet to be taken back to the Police morgue as Vernon was yet to

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[melanie_anne]

I'm impressed you've updated so quickly! It's a very interesting case and I'm looking forward to seeing where this leads.

Just one comment: I noticed a few places where you haven't capitalised the "I".

[sparkly_sequins]

Brilliant! Very intriguing, cant wait for the next chapter. Thanks for directing me here. x