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FIC: Separate Sides, PG-13, Bill/Tom, 1/1

Sep 05, 2013 10:41

Title: Separate Sides
Author: ???
Pairing(s): Bill/Tom, mentions of Bill/OFC and Tom/OMC
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Twincest, Mental disorder, and brief mention of eating disorder
Summary: Of course he would see Tom, he saw Tom wherever he went. Even looking in a mirror Bill couldn’t help but try to imagine it was Tom. He felt lost without his ( Read more... )

rating: pg13/12, pairing: bill/tom, fest: fqf_2013

Comments 6

kseenaa September 5 2013, 22:06:34 UTC

Now THAT... was bloody brilliant. Taking up all the issues of the whole thing with twincest that so many writers just choose to ignore. Here you take them all (almost) on head on, and deal with them. And still give hopes for a happy ending.

That takes a lot of skill. :-)

I truly enjoyed this. WELL DONE!

hexenhasel September 5 2013, 22:25:02 UTC

OMG the Angst! But you wrote it so beautifully, and realistically about the situation. It hurt my heart to read this, but it also made me smile too at the end as Bill and Tom were able to communicate finally and start to heal each other.

A lovely FQF story!

zeph317toho September 8 2013, 04:35:11 UTC

This story left me feeling so unsettled, and I mean that in the best way. It stuck with me for hours and left me melancholy until I remembered that the ending was hopeful. I love the way you wrote this, the language, the prose. All of Bill's struggles felt very real, and though we didn't get to hear all of Tom's side, his actions spoke loudly. You did an amazing job with this, and I think I love you more for not writing the explicit scene and instead dealing with all the fallout. This story was great; thank you very much for sharing it with us!

steinsgrrl September 8 2013, 06:36:03 UTC

I'm in absolute awe. This was so wonderfully written and so angsty, you had me totally hooked. And since I obviously know who you are, I hope it's okay for me to say that your writing has developed and grown so much in the time I've known you. I believe this is one of your best. :)

fyredancer September 18 2013, 03:05:33 UTC

You hit me right in the feels! I'm sorry it took me so long to comment, but in a very real way the story was so devastating. This wasn't quite what I expected, but of course it was so much better because of that. The ending was definitely hopeful, but doesn't erase the angst of what they went through, nor should it.

Thank you for such a great story!