Put you back on solid ground, None, PG13

Dec 17, 2008 10:25

Season's Greetings to Lirren from your Secret Santa

Title: Put you back on solid ground
Author: lirren
Pairing(s): none
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: Not mine, all fiction.
Warnings: Massive amounts of fluff. ‘Tis the season.
Summary: The band’s end-of-year retreat doesn’t turn out quite as peaceful as planned.
Recipient: Lirren
Author's notes: This is ( Read more... )

rating: pg13/12, fest: christmas_2008, category: gen

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peki January 1 2009, 18:11:59 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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fangirl_07 December 17 2008, 11:51:04 UTC
This was so good ♥
I loved all those little scenes where you can see the interactions among them. Lovely!
And the end was great ;)

Definetely a keeper ^^

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peki January 1 2009, 18:13:44 UTC
Thank you, I very much enjoyed writing those little scenes. Happy you liked it! :)

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naruke_chan December 17 2008, 12:55:30 UTC
These characterizations were sooo brilliant. He cooed softly to it as to a newborn baby as he took the instrument from its padded velvety case. is totally me with violins. xD And I cried when Gustav said his glasses were broken. It was just so...ugh, so sad. This entire fic is made of win, the dialogue was brilliant, and I have a good idea who this is...>:D

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peki January 1 2009, 18:14:52 UTC
Hee, did you guess right? I'm curious :)

Thank you, I'm particularly happy if you enjoyed the characterisations.

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naruke_chan January 1 2009, 20:32:56 UTC
Haha, I was sort of right? I thought it was either you or Haylzee. xD

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lirren December 17 2008, 12:55:47 UTC
Oh, Santa. I could not have asked for a better story. This was incredible, and it's exactly what I like best - getting to see the boys just being boys and living their lives. My heart actually ached for Tom when he was so worried about Bill, and I was angry right along with him when Bill came bouncing back in the door. I've been in that situation with someone I love more than life itself, so I know exactly how he felt.

Thank you so much for my gift. It made my Christmas. ^__^

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peki January 1 2009, 16:08:55 UTC
I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Your prompt left me a lot of artistic freedom, and I was hoping I had chosen a scenario you'd like. :) I loved writing this for you!

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mieka_writes December 17 2008, 13:11:49 UTC
WOW.. just wow.. I felt like I was a ghost in the room watching the guys interact..

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peki January 1 2009, 18:16:49 UTC
Haha, that's good, if it felt that realistic :) Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

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mieka_writes January 1 2009, 20:02:14 UTC
it was all the little details... Gustav getting hung up on his glasses (not the car) Georg suddenly doing a quiet freak out when he realizes how close it was... THEN realizing no one has heard from Bill and Tom doing a loud freak out..

very realistic...

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