Fic: Starts Again

Nov 13, 2010 13:42

Title: Starts Again
Author: twfftw
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Humour
Spoilers: None, I don't think? Ur-vague references to a few cases, but nothing you'll even notice if you aren't already familiar with the eps, and I haven't even see the end of S2 (So set in a vaguely S1/S2 shaped space).
Pairing: Jane/Cho
Word Count: 6370
Warnings: None, really; some sexual ( Read more... )

fic, mentalist fic

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enmuse November 13 2010, 19:49:13 UTC
Effing hell, this is aaaaaammmmmmmmaaaaazzzzzzzzziiiinnnngggg!

I was in love from the first scene! Oh my goooooooosssshhhhh, loved it allllllll. I'm incoherent with joy! Jane is wonderfully recognizable even with the amnesia. Loooovvveeee him. And aw man, of course he had to be shocked back by the dreaded wall of dooom. D:

But damn~ *huggles* Great ending line, very right. Although now I want s'more snuggly stuffs... or, y'know, pr0n. ;p I'm not picky, lol.

But in some: OMG THIS WAS AMAZING. *in love*

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tfwftw November 15 2010, 04:42:47 UTC
YAY I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!!

That was kind of the first thing I thought of when you said amnesia: "But the wall of doooom! What memory loss could survive in the face of it??"

(Think of it as a to-do list: 1) Repaint upstairs bedroom in Red John's blood. 2) Sexins with Cho.)

Wheee!

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enmuse November 15 2010, 04:44:59 UTC
*laugh/choke* That is horribly morbid. I thought you were into happy? XD

(I miss happy Cho. Cho is getting too much abuse - well, everyone is - right now in my Nano.)

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tfwftw November 16 2010, 00:20:42 UTC
I am! But Jane... isn't, so much. Or he is, except that IS his definition of a happy ending!

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tfwftw November 15 2010, 04:43:48 UTC
Woo! Awesome. Always OK. And thank you again for the help!!

(I've been meaning to look at that comm you recc'd... will they take stuff already posted on a personal journal?)

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doyle_sb4 November 13 2010, 21:32:07 UTC
Here via cedara's rec. It isn't a pairing I'd thought of, even though it suddenly seems so obvious and right - I usually have a hard time seeing Jane/anyone plausibly happening, given his history, but the amnesia plot's a fascinating way of exploring that. Fabulously in character, I loved it.

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tfwftw November 15 2010, 04:45:38 UTC
That's kind of my thing with them too - I mean, they would be so great! Except for the part where Jane is so deeply traumatized by his family's murder it consumes his life.

So yes - the amnesia was perfect for that ;)

Thanks!

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felis26 November 15 2010, 18:10:31 UTC
That was fantastic. :)
Gawd, this pairing is so hot it's almost a sin. *happy sigh*

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tfwftw November 16 2010, 00:21:48 UTC
Heeee. I am very entertained to get this comment on a Jane/Cho story, not a Dean/Cas story. But yes: they are very hot!

(much like your icon. Yow.)

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kelliem November 15 2010, 19:35:19 UTC
Here via cedara's rec- this is a great story! You did a wonderful job keeping Jane and Cho both perfectly recognizable. Bravo!

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tfwftw November 16 2010, 00:21:58 UTC
Thanks!

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