[May 2008 Entry, #12 of #13] [First Aid, Breakdown, Wildrider] Nothing But My Job

Jun 01, 2008 11:47

Title: Nothing But My Job
Rating: T
Universe: G1
Characters: First Aid, Breakdown, Wildrider
Word Count: 834

Nothing But My Job )

wildrider, breakdown, entry, first aid, may 2008 contest, g1

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cold_sapphire June 2 2008, 06:32:00 UTC
Medic love <3. Though it makes me wonder what their version of the Hippocratic oath would be.

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seikk June 18 2008, 03:42:58 UTC
Thank you for reviewing! The medics are love and they deserve more of it *nods*

...and their hippocratic oath...*shrugs* I always considered it along the lines of ours. 'Do no harm' and all that...

I must think on this.

But again! Thanks for reviewing! *offers cookies*

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dreams_of_all June 2 2008, 17:01:49 UTC
Eeee, First Aid! ♥ And I love how you write him: that is so what he'd do. And then I love how you describe the 'look'--it fits so perfectly, and it captures the desperation--gorgeous!

And then how he was shot: it's in character. Hurrah! And you did such a wonderful job with him not being killed, even indirectly--it's subtle but it still gets the point across, irrevocably. I love it!

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seikk June 18 2008, 03:41:22 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for the review!

I was hoping I was portraying the idea right, so I'm glad to here it ^_^;

Thank you for reviewing. It gives me the warm fuzzies. *offers cookie plate*

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