Comments | tfic_contest: [May 2008 Entry, #5 of #13] [Mirage x Thundercracker] Neglecting the Now

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[May 2008 Entry, #5 of #13] [Mirage x Thundercracker] Neglecting the Now

Jun 01, 2008 10:57

Title: Neglecting the Now
Rating: T
Universe: G-1
Pairing: Mirage x Thundercracker
Word Count: 880

( Neglecting the Now )

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Comments 4

lucifer June 1 2008, 18:28:36 UTC

I love how both Mirage and Thundercracker are portrayed here, and the description in this one is just perfect ♥.

pax_athena June 1 2008, 19:10:59 UTC

Oooh, beautiful.
I love it when a writer manages to make such a pairing work, giving reasons, making the reader understand. Great!

dreams_of_all June 2 2008, 16:12:38 UTC

I love your Mirage and Thundercracker! You do a great job with them.

And I love how you don't go romantic--you keep things largely a matter of convenience and similarity and just getting away from the war. It works for these two--fantastic! And I love how you keep them both not-really-an-Autobot/a-Decepticon, but still definitely not the other. It works for them so well!

Again: Great job!

azardarkstar June 2 2008, 20:10:52 UTC

Very nice. Both Thundercracker and Mirage are often neglected characters, and it is nice to see them in the spotlight. I like the flow and how the pairing is more one of convenience. It leaves it open enough for their liaison to finally end or to become something deeper. The last paragraph is especially poignant.

Zari