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FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 1.1 anonymous June 30 2012, 18:59:27 UTC
Prompt is here: a href="http://tfanonkink.livejournal.com/10462.html?thread=10726878#t10726878

My idea is that Starscream harbors a secret crush on Megatron, and after another failed mission, the Decepticon leader berates Starscream and angrily beats his SIC for his failure. He then orders Starscream to leave the room only to feel unwell a few seconds later. Primus intervenes and puts the Decepticon leader into the POV of a Megatron figurine Starscream keeps in his quarters, completely immobilized and helpless to watch Starscream. He learns through the other's masturbation to him how much his SIC feels about him and after waking up in his own body again, goes to pay a visit to Starscream~I've changed it a bit (with requester's permission, and thank you again!), because I couldn't think of how to pull off the part where Megatron's in the figurine. But Starscream having fun with the figurine (and Megatron finding out about it) is another story. AND THEREFORE THIS. Here's the first few bits. More coming throughout the day and possibly ( ... )

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 1.2 anonymous June 30 2012, 19:00:15 UTC
His hand moved with practiced ease to a small panel on the back of the figure. As delicately as he could, he flipped one of the switches there, murmuring in anticipation.

The figurine's optics flickered and then flared to life, glowing a bright reddish-orange.
Starscream shuddered at the brightness, imagining that the piercing glow was his lord's gaze, staring as greedily at its handiwork as Starscream had always hoped he would.

Starscream hadn't been able to find any lights in exactly the proper shade; the red of his lord's optics was as unique as their bearer. But this was good enough.

Oblivious fool Megatron might have been, but at least his little toy knew it should properly adore him.

Twitching his wings again and shuddering at the sting, he carried the figurine to the edge of his berth and laid it there with an almost reverent gentleness. He slid a hand over it once, savoring the pits and dents in the metal because they were real, because they were scars, because they were hisThen he stepped back, striking a salacious pose. ( ... )

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 1.3 anonymous June 30 2012, 22:22:33 UTC
He set it back down gently, admiring the enormous silver phallus before sliding aside his own spike cover and taking himself in hand ( ... )

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 1.4 anonymous June 30 2012, 22:25:38 UTC
His glossa danced over its helmet, curling over the symbol of Megatron's authority, worn like any vulgar mech might wear a crown. His free hand moved against the rim of his valve again, feeling the lubricant pooling there as his glossa slid over its cheeks and chin and carefully, carefully cleaned its makeshift optics. They felt hot under his mouth, burning as they gave off light, and he slid his finger just barely in his valve and held it there.

That was maddening, but Starscream wasn't doing this just to make himself overload again. With a whimper, he slid his finger out again. He'd save that for Megatron, if he could stand to do it. And if the thick-bolted fool would ever, ever, ever learn to take a slagging hint ( ... )

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 1.5 anonymous June 30 2012, 22:26:25 UTC
It was too small to properly take in his mouth, even with its exaggerated proportions. But somehow Starscream preferred it like this, his glossa twining around it as he savored his own taste on Megatron's metal ( ... )

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 1.5 anonymous July 1 2012, 08:22:47 UTC
Hi. Op again. And so far, this has just been a great read. You've made the changes work so well and I am really looking forward to see Megatron finally get in on Starscream's fantasy. Please write more soon! I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Thanks so much for taking this on, by the way. <3

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 1.5 anonymous July 1 2012, 13:38:00 UTC
<3 You're so welcome. I was concerned it wouldn't be what you wanted because I changed it a lot, but the bunny just wouldn't stop nipping at me. :)

Thanks for the delightful prompt. Starscream with a Megatron doll (or would that be a toy, like the Transformers toys we have? I wonder if it transforms! XD) is the cutest thing imaginable.

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.1 anonymous July 1 2012, 19:15:02 UTC
"Starscream," Megatron growled, slamming a dark hand against the console, "you imbecileMegatron stared, optics wide, at the scene playing out on the security monitor in front of him. When Soundwave had informed him that Starscream was up to something, he'd expected to discover the Seeker scheming in the secrecy of his quarters, plotting his latest ridiculous takeover attempt ( ... )

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.2 anonymous July 1 2012, 19:16:15 UTC
"Matters to - what - I was just there a cycle and a half ago! Surely I couldn't possibly have done anything between then and - " Starscream's vocalizer sputtered, and his voice faded out in a fuzz of static.

"Starscream," Megatron answered, his voice a gravelly purr. "I know exactly what you've been doing."

A shriek answered him, its high pitch stinging his audios. "Then you - you've been spying on me! Violating my privacy!" Megatron heard the rapid clicking of Starscream's wings, a sure sign of agitation and distress.

How would moving his wings feel, post-overload and sore from the dents Megatron's rough treatment had left there? Megatron cycled a heavy pant, not caring whether or not the Seeker heard it.

"And would I have needed to spy on you if you'd bothered, once in millions of this planet's years, to inform me of your feelings instead of shrieking pointless complaints at every turn?"

"I - I - how dare you -!"

"Instead, you waste your time pestering me and resort to some pathetic little toy you cobbled together out of ( ... )

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.2 anonymous July 1 2012, 19:18:16 UTC
Ack, my italics ate the world! Let's try that one again (mods, I don't know if it's acceptable to ask this, but could you delete that first one for me?)

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"Matters to - what - I was just there a cycle and a half ago! Surely I couldn't possibly have done anything between then and - " Starscream's vocalizer sputtered, and his voice faded out in a fuzz of static.

"Starscream," Megatron answered, his voice a gravelly purr. "I know exactly what you've been doing."

A shriek answered him, its high pitch stinging his audios. "Then you - you've been spying on me! Violating my privacy!" Megatron heard the rapid clicking of Starscream's wings, a sure sign of agitation and distress ( ... )

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.2 anonymous July 1 2012, 21:17:54 UTC
OP here.

Heheheheh. I love this. So much. <3 You've written Starscream and Megatron so in character. And poor Soundwave. XD I bet it really threw him off to witness that.

Looking forward to the next part!

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.2 anonymous July 1 2012, 22:35:27 UTC
Thanks OP! I'm so glad you like this. <3 Megatron/Starscream is an awesome pairing and it's wonderful fun to write.

And the whole idea of it being unrequited on both sides and their bickering being all about never confessing their feelings to one another and getting in their own way is hilarious and I'm glad you prompted it with the idea of Screamer having a secret crush. You're awesome <3

And yes, poor Soundwave. I'm sure he was all "Query: ...............WTF?"

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.2 anonymous July 3 2012, 06:05:59 UTC
OP again. Some people say that Starscream and Megatron is such an overdone pairing, but I really love to read such well-written work involving them. And you're writing is really great to read and spot on for their characters, it's easily one of the best takes one their pairing I've read. <3

I have so many ideas involving Starscream and Megatron, I just never have the time to write them. Ha! But, I do not regret leaving this idea here for others to write. Like in this case, just seeing it brought to life is enough to enjoy.

Thanks again for taking it and I really look forward to an update. C:

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.2 anonymous July 3 2012, 13:33:45 UTC
I'm working on more, anon. I was going to just end it there but hey, the prompt does say "smex after"! :)

I don't think the pairing is overdone at all. If anything I think it's underdone. It's really tough to find anything recent that isn't written by the same handful of people. Which is not bad, but I wish more people would write for them.

You should write some fic!

And I'm really glad you like this take on them. It's more cracky than most stuff I write, but I'm having a ton of fun. <3

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.2 anonymous July 4 2012, 01:23:21 UTC
Oh! I had no idea that you intended to end it after that point, but I am also glad you really wish to continue this.

And I really wanted to write something, but I've just been so busy with work and classes. :C

You write them so very well. It's been a joy to read. <3

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Re: FIC: G1 - Starscream/Megatron - Micro/Macro, Smex after, 2.2 anonymous July 3 2012, 01:42:44 UTC
random anon who decided to read this out of boredom despite not liking the pairing or finding the kinks very appealing wants more! Well done on the in character, also it had a nice reading flow to to, simple~

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