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Advent Calendar - December 2

Dec 02, 2010 08:33

Title: Adventures in Punctuality, and Other Unexpected Events
Fandom/Continuity: Transformers G1, Season 3
Characters/Pairings:: Sandstorm/Octane, Sandstorm/Octane/Blitzwing
Rating: T
Word count: 1584 in two hours including editing
Warnings: Groping, innuendo, suggestive lines of asterisks.
Summary: In which Octane is unusually prompt.
Prompt: ( Read more... )

character: octane, character: blitzwing, author: caia_comica, character: sandstorm, continuity: g1, .advent calendar 2010

Comments 18

__wilderness__ December 2 2010, 13:42:37 UTC

Hee! Gotta love me some Octane/Sandstorm. And what a delicious story.

Edit - forgot to say how much I adore your last warning there :)

caiusmajor December 2 2010, 16:11:39 UTC

Thank you! I love this pairing.

And, hee, thanks! Asterisks are terribly dirty. XD

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caiusmajor December 2 2010, 16:14:18 UTC

Thank you! I love that Octane's wacky nicknames are, at least in part, canon. (Though I think it was actually "Tripty-baby" come to think of it...)

And, hee, yeah, there's a reason the Junkions didn't actually appear much! Glad you liked what little there was, though.

Never has this icon been more appropriate ultharkitty December 2 2010, 21:27:49 UTC

there was nothing that bored Sandstorm more than a bunch of Paradronians trying to reach consensus Especially when he could be boinking! ♥

I adore this paragraph: "SANDSTORM!" several of the Paradronians yelled at him in unison. They were really starting to get used to this. "Get your Decepticon out of here!" Fraggin' awesome.

And the Junkions' speech patterns - beautifully done.

Also: TAIL ROTOR ADORABLENESS! AND TREASURE MAP FOR THE WIN! :D :D :D

And it has a moral :D YAY!

This whole story made me laugh so hard. You rock :D

Yay! Sandstorm approves! caiusmajor December 2 2010, 22:30:24 UTC

Aww, thank you so much!

Seriously! Don't any of those other Paradronians have boinking to do? Sandstorm could help them out with that...

Although I suspect at this point they only invite him to the meetings because they're also starting to think that they're more entertaining when interrupted by Octane and whoever he pissed off this week. XD

I possibly spent longer trying to come up with Junkion dialog than on the entire rest of the fic.

Yes, treasure map! I took your advice! And you are also totally to blame for the rotor fetish. XD

Moral being that Octane doesn't come cheap (but he's totally worth it!)?

Re: Yay! Sandstorm approves! ultharkitty December 3 2010, 16:16:03 UTC

lol, they could certainly do with boinking. Perhaps they invite Sandstorm to their meetings in the hope that he'll introduce them to the wonderful world of getting laid. :P

I am very glad to take the blame for the rotor fetish (and the treasure map :P) :D

Ahahaha! I took the moral to be that being friendly and inclusive has its rewards ;) But yeah, that works too, and is probably more useful in the long run :P

Re: Yay! Sandstorm approves! caiusmajor December 4 2010, 05:41:53 UTC

being friendly and inclusive Is that what they're calling it these days? XDD

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spacehussy December 2 2010, 22:21:49 UTC

Can I just tell you that when you write for these guys, I can hear their dialogue perfectly in my head in their voices. It is that perfect. *glee* I go mushy for Octane calling him "babe" XD so much

fgkhfjhg I love Octane's shenanigans and Sandstorm's ability to roll with them; he clearly knows exactly what he was getting into with Octane. That is awesome. I love these bits:

"Get your Decepticon out of here!" (OF COURSE OCTANE IS HIS DECEPTICON <333)

"No shirts, no credits, no service!" the motorcycle said, and its rider added, "Service terminated due to non-payment of bill! Program will be cancelled!" (sdkfjhgs freaking awesome Junkion-speak!)

"Shame. I suppose we could do it like this." Octane rubbed the rotor a bit.

"You like it better with my mouth on you."

(...guh. That is ridiculously sexy.)

Also omg HI BLITZWING. *so happy~! fghkfdjshj Sandstorm inviting him to join - no wonder he and Octane are so delightfully compatible <3 Obviously Blitzwing is making the right choice; srsbns can wait! sexing is very important. ( ... )

caiusmajor December 3 2010, 01:06:08 UTC

Aww, thanks! Their dialog comes ridiculously easily, for the most part. (The Junkions, on the other hand, are a pain in the ass.)

Octane calls everyone 'babe' or some variant thereof, but with Sandstorm he means it. XD

More specifically, Octane is "That Decepticon of his!"

I am so glad the bits of the sexin' I actually wrote were hot for you! Thank you!

eerian_sadow December 3 2010, 04:31:07 UTC

*shines up platter, places internet on, hands over* your Junkion-speak rocked.

caiusmajor December 4 2010, 05:42:20 UTC

Awww, thank you! And for just a few lines, no less, I'm flattered.

eerian_sadow December 4 2010, 05:48:45 UTC

:D but it was a few lines that just absolutely made the mood. i loved the whole, but that little bit just really shone for me.