[Prompt 3] Rabbit

Sep 26, 2010 20:12

Title: Rabbit
Warnings: None, though hints at previous car-related violence
Disclaimer: I do not own!
Characters: Streetwise
Rating: PG
Summary: Hit-and-runs do not make Streetwise a happy interceptor. At all. (Run, rabbit. Run.)

Run and run as fast as you can... )

character: streetwise, author: therixkeycopy, continuity: g1

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ultharkitty September 27 2010, 07:10:14 UTC
I love the flow of the prose in this, and the way that you build the characterisation for Streetwise and his quarry. Very cool indeed :D

This paragraph especially is gorgeous: He would know it too, by the blood stains, small, hardly noticeable, almost unnoticeable at all, speckled just over its left front tire, red that was more brown; the color of its paint speckled on dirty, bug-smeared silver.

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therixkeycopy September 28 2010, 03:52:14 UTC
Your comment just made my forever 8D

Hee~ That's my favorite line. I'm so glad you like it! And thank you very much for your comment.

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