Fanfiction: Five Firsts (Optimus/Prowl)

[neverminetohold]

Title: “A First Time for Everything"
Status: One-Shot; Complete
Fandom: G1
Characters/Pairing: Optimus Prime/Prowl; Jazz
Disclaimer: I would love to own Transformers, but that honor belongs to Hasbro and some others, poor me.
Rating: PG-13
Beta: The great snare-chan! I changed two sentences after her beta work, so those mistakes are mine *hugs tight* ^-^

Comments

[bluebirdsoaring]

It's an amazing evolution of relationships you build here. From hard beginnings where each mech really thought the worst of the other, to such a sweet ending with a beutiful outflowing of their shared lowe...perfect =)

[neverminetohold]

Aw *blush* Thank you! I'm glad it worked out, I was scared stiff of the looming deadline, since this was my first challenge response LOL With those two, I always imagine a hard start they need to overcome which than leads to true understanding and trust. He he, normally I don't like it when sparklings are involved, no clue where that did come from.

[ayngelcat]

Good character and relationship development in relatively few words - very well done :-)

[neverminetohold]

Thanks, I'm really glad that you liked it!

[paranoidprowl]

haha cute whats the sparklings name?