Fic- Untitled pt 2, Jazz/Lockdown, Weekly Response Fic

[left_eye_better]

Title: Untitled pt 2- See author’s note
Writer: Left_eye_better
Rating: PG, mech blood?
Characters: Jazz, and Lockdown
Prompt: Jazz/Lockdown- catching a shadow
Warning: See rating, besides that, Unbeta’d
Word Count: 825
Continuity: Animated with a reference to the G1 comics
Disclaimer: Transformers © Hasbro/Takara/Dreamworks/whoever.

Comments

[anavidbookworm]

This was a nice continuation of the first and still leaves me wanting more. The problem is that I don't have enough of a glimpse of this verse to know what I want. :)

I agree that Prowl coming back, while always enjoyable, would be a little too predictable. I'd like to see them open up the dojo for new students. Since you seem to be importing characters from other verses you could use Bludgeon, Mirage, Perceptor, and/or Thundercracker as students. They all either show martial art talent in their own verse or may have the correct personality to learn it.

[left_eye_better]

Actually all Characters listed in the fic are mentioned to exist in the TFA-verse, but I'm not opposed to importing characters... And all those listed in the comments except Bludgeon to my knowledge also already exist in TFA. I have no problem telling you who I was thinking of using a students. If you're interested message me on LJ and we can chat it out.