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Weekly Request Response

Apr 09, 2011 22:52

Title: Candle
Universe: Bayverse (post 2007 film, prior to ROTF)
Rating: PG/K+
Pairing: Jazz/Bumblebee
Prompt: Candle in the wind
Word Count: 2,237
Notes: Probably not what the requester was picturing but the idea wouldn't leave me alone (and is now developing possible continuations in my mind).
Warnings: A couple of Cybertronian curses, mentioned ( Read more... )

format: fanfiction, bumblebee, author: mystical maiden, continuity: bay movies, weekly request response, jazz, rated: pg/k+

Comments 4

niyazi_a April 9 2011, 13:32:24 UTC

Author tag made and added. ^_^

mystical_maiden April 9 2011, 14:56:34 UTC

Oh wow thanks =D

eerian_sadow April 9 2011, 22:49:13 UTC

happy prompter is very pleased with this. honestly, i had no pre-concieved notions about what any repsonse to my prompt should contain; i just had the song stuck in my head and realized i hadn't seen any Jazz/Bee for a really long time.

but this... this is gorgeous. the first person perspective really helped convey a lot of emotion, and the ending was so very sweet.

mystical_maiden April 10 2011, 06:43:17 UTC

Being quite the Jazz/Bee fan i know exactly what you mean about not seeing it around.

It was my first time writing in first person so It's good to hear i didn't mess up.

I'm really really glad you liked it. ^_^