Title: Untitled - See author’s note
Writer: Left_eye_better
Rating: PG, for vaguely lewd comments
Characters: Jazz, and Lockdown
Prompt: Jazz/Lockdown- Catching a Shadow
Warning: See rating, besides that, Unbeta’d
Word Count: 869
Continuity: Animated with a reference to the G1 comics
Disclaimer: Transformers © Hasbro/Takara/Dreamworks/whoever.
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Comments 6
Anyway, as it stands, I love how Jazz is so serious - he definitely knows what he's getting into - and I get the vibe of "playful but deadly" from Lockdown and it is awesome. :D
Title? Well, for a one-shot, could be something boring like "Risk" or "Bet," and a longer fic (if I read the implications correctly) could be something silly like "The New Cyberninja Academy."
Am I awesome now?
Or, heck, you can just use the prompt as a title. That often works surprisingly well!
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I really do kinda of want to continue this but... There didn't seem to be a big interest in it unfortunately. I do hate to act as thought that matter, but it's not much of an encouragement.
If I continued it'd be a ride.
I see so many "Lockdown corrupts poor innocent Prowl" fics. I'd like to see one good "Someone tricks Lockdown back into his morals" fic and if any mech could it would be Jazz.
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When it comes to a title all I can think of is Devil's Bargain or Last Resort.
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I do hope you consider continuing this, since you have obviously put a lot of thought into it so far. Also, I'm just really curious how Jazz would make this whole situation work.
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If I ever get to the point where I discuss the Lockdown and Yoketron situation in the fic, my thoughts on it will come out, but ... Even Prowl never finished his training under Yoketron. I see it as respect born out of similarity, that Lockdown had for Prowl. In his mind, perhaps, they were to similar mechs that never found a place in the universe, only by the time he came across Prowl, Prowl actually had.
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