Fic: Welcoming Burns, Bluestreak/Ratchet

[left_eye_better]

Title/Prompt: Welcoming Burns

Comments

[__wilderness__]

That last line is utter win.

After the rollercoaster ride of the fic (and what a fantastic ride!), that line just made it all better.

[left_eye_better]

Rollercoaster... I think that's probably a very apt term to describe the way I tend to write.

That last line was actually something that almost didn't happen, but it seemed like it was missing something.

I probably didn't include enough warnings for this... and I have the worry it didn't stick enough in character.

[anavidbookworm]

This was rather enjoyable but the end was the best part. It made me laugh which is quite a feat after all the drama of the rest of the fic.

I don't think your bots were unreasonably out of character. Bluestreak was portrayed much differently then normal but you explained that as being his true self where the happy, talkative mech is just his trauma.

[left_eye_better]

Yeah, I'll make a situation and play with the characters until I can get the results I'm looking for. I'm glad you didn't think they were too terrible but even I can tell I was stretching in, but hey at least I tried to explain why?