Comments | tf_rare_pairing: Fic: Inherited, Springer/Prowl

left_eye_better in tf_rare_pairing

Fic: Inherited, Springer/Prowl

Mar 16, 2011 02:18

Title/Prompt: Inherited ( Read more... )

springer, method: tactile, rated: r/m, author: left_eye_better, prowl

Comments 8

__wilderness__ March 16 2011, 10:57:32 UTC

Oooh... I love all the interplay between Springer and Prowl. And that last bit with Rack'n'Ruin was just beautiful.

left_eye_better March 16 2011, 15:30:27 UTC

Thank you, normally I try to end on a pleasant note or at least a comedic one and that just didn't work out with this bit. The interaction between Springer and Prowl is completely the only reason I got this far with them. They both know how to dance only with two different styles.

kujasangela March 16 2011, 12:10:04 UTC

D: this was tragically beautiful at the end. I teared up with the last line. D:

left_eye_better March 16 2011, 15:35:23 UTC

Not many people write anything with Rack'n'Ruin even though they seem like enormously interesting character/s. I tend to have to believe that if more people included the two they'd probably treat them as one entity cause of their form. They actually did die, though it wasn't as peaceful as this, but that was in the comics. Sorry it was so sad though... normally I try to be more cheery than this.

kujasangela March 17 2011, 03:49:28 UTC

No, no, no! Don't be sorry! it was beautiful story and I loved reading it, even if it did have a sad ending <3

And you're SO right about the treating them as one.

eerian_sadow March 17 2011, 02:59:21 UTC

oh, my heart broke there at the end. there was the banter and the light heartedness and then, BAM. oh it was wonderful.

also, got that tag taken care of. i have no idea how he slipped through the cracks before. (i know others have written him for this comm...)

left_eye_better March 17 2011, 03:41:02 UTC

No problem, I was confused at the lack of Spring tag. Thanks <3

It was planned to go further but it got put down and never picked up again. Figured it should go to rust in my WIP folder so I posted it. Glad you seemed to like it, sorry for the sudden mood switch at the end.

eerian_sadow March 17 2011, 03:42:58 UTC

you never know; the bunny could spontaneously revive. ;) and i really did like the mood switch. it sets them up for something more than the banter and fail-flirting and shows them more depth than either thought the other had. was great. ^_^