Challenge Fic: 0000000004.89, Blaster/Bluestreak

[left_eye_better]

Title: 0000000004.89

Comments

[aniay]

This... was EPIC

Left me speechless and warm and smiling with a tiny tears of happiness in the corners of my eyes.

It's so moving and nice and touching. I love the slow pacing, almost poetic language and simple warmth that seems to make your heart beet faster.

It's not the romance that is most amazing but meeting of sparks, the mystery.

I loved the moment their optics met, I loved Blaster trying NOT to acces the forbidden chanell.

The last sentence is a perfect ending.

While it's not fic that would make me go awwwww, or squeeee, or unf... It has some undescribable quality that keeps me enthralled with it.

(I'm quite wordy for a speechless person):P

AWESOME

[left_eye_better]

I had watched a movie recently that had amazing pacing. It was a terribly dark film, but it revolved completely around small maybe at most ten minute sections and I felt that perhaps that with the way I write it would be best to emulae that style. None of the sections on their own seem important, but when the points are used to draw a line they become something. I love your comments, even if you are wordy of a speechless person <3

[femme4jack]

You know, it just occurred to me that I think Ratchet told him "do not listen" on purpose, knowing that he would.

[left_eye_better]

Less work for the medical staff right? >> I could see it.