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ouronlyhunter in tf_rare_pairing

A Bridge to Oblivion

Mar 16, 2009 12:13

Title: A Bridge to Oblivion

By: mmouse15Rating: R ( Read more... )

method: pnp, shockwave, starscream, continuity: g1, rated: r/m, author: mmouse15

Comments 3

ouronlyhunter March 16 2009, 19:28:38 UTC

'Shockwave looked him over. "You would get far if you did."'

Sniggers. That has to be my favorite line. (And might just count as Decepticon politics in and of itself, since it assumes their used to whoring themselves out to further their own agendas. And Megatron offering his services and Starscream's reactions? Awesome.)

mmouse15 March 21 2009, 16:31:10 UTC

Thanks! I loved that line - it just flowed out and when I had to rewrite part of it, I knew I had to keep that.

I did rather assume that the 'Con army got ahead by who they knew rather than what they knew or how good a fighter they were. Thanks for liking what I did!

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mmouse15 March 21 2009, 16:33:54 UTC

Oh, hurray! I'm so glad you liked that, and that I managed to satisfy that part of the prompt. It was a fun story to write.