Mea Culpa

Mar 16, 2009 12:11

Title: Mea Culpa

Author: tainry

Rating: R

Disclaimer: Characters and concepts copyright HasTak

Warnings: Plug-n-play, some angst

Prompt:Pairing wanted: Ironhide/Mirage ( Read more... )

method: pnp, mirage, ironhide, continuity: g1, rated: r/m, author: tainry

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ouronlyhunter March 16 2009, 19:21:32 UTC
This was just... incredibly hot. I lvoe it being told from Ironhide's POV. (Plus, All Hail Megatron fanfic? Awesome! I'll feel like an idiot if I'm wrong, but between Prime being 'gone' and the Swarm, I'm pretty sure I nailed that one.)

Also, the last line seems kinda innocent, but it makes me oh, shit, too. Kinda makes me wonder how Mirage'll fair.

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tainry March 21 2009, 06:57:40 UTC
Woo! Thankee! :D (Indeedy! Got it in one! I am SO GLAD I picked up that series, despite thinking it was Con-centric and therefore depressing. I have been very impressed so far!)

Yeahhhhhhh. I felt a little evil, leaving it there, but it does have impact that way... ^^;
Of course then I had to imagine how it all fell out...that Mirage doesn't come back on schedule, and he doesn't come back and he doesn't come back, and then they find a piece of him......and...........
Might have to write that. ;D

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ouronlyhunter March 21 2009, 10:01:06 UTC
Nods. And yay for AHM fanfiction! I want to give my hand a go at AHM Frenzy actually, because he is just... amazing.

And heh. I think it's a brilliant move leaving it there. Total impact :D And... omg, wants sequel. *must not try to bully you into writing one*

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tainry March 22 2009, 03:10:02 UTC
Heee! More AHM fic would of course be awesomesauce. <3

Two...or three....er...four more things ought to get finished first, but, yeah, I do want to write an addendum. ^^;

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spectrumpheonix March 16 2009, 20:19:44 UTC
Really loved this, even for an odd pairing for me to like, I did. Very well written, and I love the joking part too! Nice one :)

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tainry March 21 2009, 06:59:14 UTC
Thankee! First person POV is a bit unusual, but it really helped with this one, forcing me to keep in Ironhide's headspace. :D Yeah, I am congenitally unable to maintain pure angst. Giggles will always sneak in.

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sunny_and_sides March 16 2009, 21:58:33 UTC
Beautiful. After finally getting to read issues 1-6 of All Hail Megatron this was great.

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tainry March 21 2009, 06:59:55 UTC
Thankee! I am eagerly awaiting #8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
::flails::

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ouronlyhunter March 21 2009, 10:02:16 UTC
Have you gotten 8 yet? (Hee, I have the Starscream variant cover :D)

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tainry March 22 2009, 03:13:06 UTC
HUSH! They shipped it yesterday I think - I buy comics from TFAW these days since my brother is no longer into manga and therefore not as easily persuaded to drive me/us out to A-1 or Comics & Comix. =_=
::waits:: ::fidgets::

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mmouse15 March 17 2009, 03:29:46 UTC
I love that you used a first person POV, and Ironhide/Mirage was hot! Awesome story-telling, and now you have me all worried about Mirage out there...

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tainry March 21 2009, 07:02:12 UTC
Thankee!!! <3
The POV really helped in this case; keeping it to Ironhide's headspace was fun!
Well, I had to work out for myself what happens to him. ^^; Might have to write that up some time. It was a bit evil to leave it there but I ran out of time. DX

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tainry March 21 2009, 07:03:02 UTC
Thanks! I aims to please! ^_____^

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