This was just... incredibly hot. I lvoe it being told from Ironhide's POV. (Plus, All Hail Megatron fanfic? Awesome! I'll feel like an idiot if I'm wrong, but between Prime being 'gone' and the Swarm, I'm pretty sure I nailed that one.)
Also, the last line seems kinda innocent, but it makes me oh, shit, too. Kinda makes me wonder how Mirage'll fair.
Woo! Thankee! :D (Indeedy! Got it in one! I am SO GLAD I picked up that series, despite thinking it was Con-centric and therefore depressing. I have been very impressed so far!)
Yeahhhhhhh. I felt a little evil, leaving it there, but it does have impact that way... ^^; Of course then I had to imagine how it all fell out...that Mirage doesn't come back on schedule, and he doesn't come back and he doesn't come back, and then they find a piece of him......and........... Might have to write that. ;D
Thankee! First person POV is a bit unusual, but it really helped with this one, forcing me to keep in Ironhide's headspace. :D Yeah, I am congenitally unable to maintain pure angst. Giggles will always sneak in.
HUSH! They shipped it yesterday I think - I buy comics from TFAW these days since my brother is no longer into manga and therefore not as easily persuaded to drive me/us out to A-1 or Comics & Comix. =_= ::waits:: ::fidgets::
Thankee!!! <3 The POV really helped in this case; keeping it to Ironhide's headspace was fun! Well, I had to work out for myself what happens to him. ^^; Might have to write that up some time. It was a bit evil to leave it there but I ran out of time. DX
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Also, the last line seems kinda innocent, but it makes me oh, shit, too. Kinda makes me wonder how Mirage'll fair.
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Yeahhhhhhh. I felt a little evil, leaving it there, but it does have impact that way... ^^;
Of course then I had to imagine how it all fell out...that Mirage doesn't come back on schedule, and he doesn't come back and he doesn't come back, and then they find a piece of him......and...........
Might have to write that. ;D
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And heh. I think it's a brilliant move leaving it there. Total impact :D And... omg, wants sequel. *must not try to bully you into writing one*
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Two...or three....er...four more things ought to get finished first, but, yeah, I do want to write an addendum. ^^;
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The POV really helped in this case; keeping it to Ironhide's headspace was fun!
Well, I had to work out for myself what happens to him. ^^; Might have to write that up some time. It was a bit evil to leave it there but I ran out of time. DX
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