November Challenge Entry - Restraint (Shockwave, Frenzy)

Nov 30, 2010 00:02


Title: Restraint
Rating: T
Pairing/Characters: Shockwave, Frenzy
Continuity: G1-ish
Disclaimer: Not mine, Hasbro's and other people.
Warnings: Perversion, innuendo
Summary: Shockwave's ecstatic by having a very small subordinate working under him for a while...

Author's Note: Small story for tf_rare_pairing November Challenge. I took:

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shockwave, frenzy, rated: pg 13/t, author: anon_feather, challenge: nov 2010 do it yourself, continuity: g1

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eerian_sadow November 30 2010, 07:24:49 UTC
*handwaves* your time stamp says the 30th, so you're good. ^_^

and i saw no glaring errors as i read through, but i also wasn't in editor mode. your piece stands up to the casual read, though. ^_^

and i'll get your author tag added in just moments. :D

*mod hat off*

EEEEEEEEE! i loved your take on Shockwave here! the minibot fetish has always been one of those out-of-left-field-but-i-love-it-anyway things that fandom has done, and i adored getting to see it applied here. and Frenzy's heebie jeebies reaction to him staring was wonderful.

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anon_feather November 30 2010, 11:56:36 UTC
Well, Livejournal allows users to modify the time stamp, so I added an hour... *shift eyes* Thanks for the tag :D. And for the comment. I'm sure anyone would have the heebie jeebies around Shockwave :P

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eerian_sadow November 30 2010, 20:14:32 UTC
cheater! ;P

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left_eye_better November 30 2010, 07:37:02 UTC
I like this fic and I like where you were going with it, but I have to say I don't think Daddy Sounders would. XD Cassettes, oh how I love you.

I really liked the pacing on the fic, and also how there was consistent comedy.

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anon_feather November 30 2010, 12:05:10 UTC
No, Daddy!Soundwave would really freak...

Megatron *in thoughts*:'I should have remembered Shockwave's minibot fetish. I'm gonna end up with a one less spy.
Soundwave *reading thoughts: WHAT?!

Course, Soundwave can't do much (Shockwave is far, he outranks him, blah, blah). If I could really make dark fics, Soundwave solution would be to kidnap one of Blaster's cassettes and exchange it for Frenzy.

Soundwave *holding Eject*: Observe: Small Autobot. Shockwave: Can do anything to it. Shiny.
Shockwave: ( O )Ooohhh *picks up Eject*
Soundwave: *grabs broken Frenzy and runs away*
Eject: Foul Play!

Course, I keep putting silliness in everything I write XD

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left_eye_better November 30 2010, 18:20:36 UTC
Nice XD Like exchanging a child's broken toy with a new one before the kid can cry.

<< Nothing wrong with comedy. Truly nothing wrong with it.

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anon_feather December 1 2010, 02:53:01 UTC
Oh, I love comedy. But for this type of fic, I would love to be master of dark and angst to make a very creepy Shockwave :P

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artemis10002000 November 30 2010, 10:38:20 UTC
Awesome fic! I love your take on Shockwave, with that minibot fetish, and Frenzy being so eager to prove himself and yet slightly disturbed by Shockwave's peculiar interest in him. So much love for your Frenzy!

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anon_feather November 30 2010, 12:11:19 UTC
Thank you for the comment :P

Minibot fetish FTW!... Well, except if your a minibot or a cassette being around a creeper like fanon!Shockwave...

(Frenzy needs a hug...
Shockwave: ( O ) *approches* Kukukuku
No! Shockwave go away! Bad cyclops!)

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artemis10002000 November 30 2010, 12:19:25 UTC
Hahaha, Soundwave with Naraku's kukuku laughter - and it suits creepyminibotpervert!Soundwave so well! (Ignore this if Inuyasha means nothing to you.)

Now I wonder how Soundwave reacted when he learnt Megatron had sent Frenzy to help Shockwave!

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anon_feather November 30 2010, 12:32:04 UTC
(Not really into Inuyasha, but I got the reference XD)

Soundwave is probably unaware *strange as that sounds* of Shockwave interest in minibots. Maybe he suggested Frenzy 'cuz Frenzy keeps wanting to show he's capable of doing things. Also, sending a constructicon would mean one les gestalt for their plans...

Anyways, Soundwave has profound guilt now.

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Shockwave (to Frenzy): *Creepy confort* Soundwave isn't comming to get you. He found you useless. He sent you to me, afterall.
Frenzy: *wimpers*

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__wilderness__ November 30 2010, 12:08:06 UTC
Oooh... creepy Shockwave is love!

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anon_feather November 30 2010, 12:12:01 UTC
Creepy Shockwave is creepy. But I love him for it XD.

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niyazi_a November 30 2010, 12:17:50 UTC
I'd be glad to beta for you in the future; the few errors here are easy catches/fixes.

Cute story! I do love that pervy Shockwave fanon thing, and Frenzy is just too exactly *wrong* for the job of being Shocky's love-object that it is just fantastic! And poor Shockwave, being cockblocked (or robotic equivalent) by Megatron! ;_;

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anon_feather November 30 2010, 12:27:13 UTC
Thanks for the beta offer. I do have a regular beta, but I would have missed the deadline by sending it :(. I'll keep your name in note if something ever happens.

Let's just hope Megs order were enough to 'cockblock' creepy Shockwave.... Sometimes following orders is just too hard. XD

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