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tainry November 17 2008, 20:04:08 UTC
Wow, you covered the arc of the relationship very well, and the descriptions are vivid! Well done!

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mmouse15 November 20 2008, 17:22:23 UTC
Damn, that was hot. So amazing and descriptive and wow! I love how you progressed the story and I love the dynamics between the two - it's wrong on so many levels and yet it's so right. Nicely done!

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kyra_neko_rei November 22 2008, 06:17:42 UTC
Wow.

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