Perecptor/Grimlock

Sep 01, 2008 07:09

*Mod note - this was done last night, and it was completely my fault that it wasn't posted. I thought I had starred all the stories which I'd gotten over a couple days to make it easier to post them all one by one, and I missed this one.

Title: Wisdom in Love

Author: tainry

Rating: R

Disclaimer: Characters and concepts copyright HasTak

Warnings: ( Read more... )

method: pnp, grimlock, perceptor, continuity: g1, rated: r/m, author: tainry

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mmouse15 September 1 2008, 15:38:23 UTC


Science geeks unite! I love how you used language as a form of foreplay between these two, and the mating dance between them was pure luv! Wonderful job!

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tainry September 4 2008, 05:18:36 UTC
Heee!
Indeed! Took me a while to figure out how to do this, but once Perceptor very politely let me know he had it under control it worked itself out.
Thankee! ^_____^

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tanta_green September 2 2008, 11:28:53 UTC
Requester here!

Wow. I'm not sure there was any way that could have been any better than it was. From the inclusion of Lightspeed at the beginning (honestly, one of my favorites. :)) to that absolutely wonderful plug and play (not to mention the little bit afterwards; that made me so unbelievably happy) to Springer's reaction at the end, which was genuinely funny. This is everything I could have hoped for. Thank you so much for writing this! :)

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tainry September 4 2008, 05:25:48 UTC
Hooray!!!!
So glad you like! ^______________^
Lightspeed is so adorable. Well, they all are, but Lightspeed is just...yeah. <333

Perceptor happens to be one of my very favoritestest 'Bots in ANY continuity. (Also one of the first toys I bought on eBay... Hm. Actually I think he was THE first eBay 'Bot. O.O Wow.) Anyway, love him to bits. So very glad to get to play with him! <33333333

Springer...he begs to be messed with, he's so damn competent. ::snicker:: Love him.

I admit I made myself think this was harder than it seemed, because of the no angst rule...because season 3 is, well, almost pure angst, considering... T_T But then I realized I was being silly, and Perceptor let me know very politely he had things under control, so off we went. ^_______________^

You are very welcome indeed!

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tanta_green September 4 2008, 06:11:37 UTC
Ooh. Thank you so much once again. I'm glad that you enjoyed playing with Perceptor. He's one of my favorites too. :) Sorry that the angst gave you difficulty. Nice way of solving it though. In-control Perceptor was wonderful.

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spectrumpheonix September 2 2008, 15:02:49 UTC
This is brilliant! The clever (No pun intended) use of scientific language, yet understandable, the cut scenes after and generally just the fic as a whole, I love.
I wish this was on the Pit or DA so I could favourite it X)

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tainry September 4 2008, 05:34:17 UTC
Hee! Thanks! It was fun, and while I was writing I coincidentally stumbled on a link to videos about four-dimensional objects, so it was also serendipitous. ^________^
You can bookmark posts in 'Memories' here on LJ, is that the same thing?

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kurichai September 4 2008, 01:25:05 UTC
Wow! Bravo!

I really enjoyed this read and loved this line in particular:

"His clenching fists would otherwise do damage and the shaking was already starting, core overheating, peripheral processors falling to static, everything twinned and amplified through the data link, and Perceptor’s body was so small and sweet beneath his, laser core so small to be so bright, mind so old to still hold such childlike wonder, and Perceptor laughed as power surged like a wave over their heads, tumbling them like schools of bright fish into the processor-storm of overload."

Especially the part with Perceptor laughing, it's so cute!

Awesome job!

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tainry September 4 2008, 05:39:54 UTC
^___________^
Thank you!
Trying to make interface and overload scenes all different from each other is a bear, but also, um, kinda fun. Hee!
I really love Perceptor, he's so neat and sweet and underutilized. <33333
Thankee! Glad you enjoyed it!

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ouronlyhunter September 5 2008, 23:18:13 UTC
I was so psyched to see Grimlock included in a pairing. And happier to see it done so well.

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tainry October 5 2008, 08:09:47 UTC
Whoops! Heya! Missed this one, sorry. ^^;
Glad you enjoyed it! ^_____^

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