I liked it a lot. Also, the dialogue was better than you think; I totally read this in their voices. And the one bit where Blaster cuts in over Ultra Magnus was really well done.
And I like Blaster's chair. I want a swively chair, though I'd probably throw myself out of it within five minutes. XD
It was? That's good to hear. C: I remember reading somewhere that for good flow you should always try to have each speech bubble below and/or to the right of the previous one. Which for left-to-right languages makes total sense.
Haha, yeah. I would pay to see you dick around on a chair like that and throw yourself off. :D
What I liked about it was the way it cut into Magnus's bubble, showing how he cut into what Magnus was saying. Oh, and the space indicating a pause after. (At least, I hope that's what it was intended to indicate. XD)
As long as you pay for the cast on my broken elbow, no problems IT WOULD BE FUN :D
Wow, this is really awesome! The characters have very strong voices, the art is as always lovely, and the story is intriguing. Is it the beginning of a graphic novel or the like?
Oh god glass. It wasn't too long ago I discovered how to get the sunlight to go through the glass. And I've been using that renderer for over two years.
I put a fair bit of thought into them most of the time and that seems to have paid off. :D
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I liked it a lot. Also, the dialogue was better than you think; I totally read this in their voices. And the one bit where Blaster cuts in over Ultra Magnus was really well done.
And I like Blaster's chair. I want a swively chair, though I'd probably throw myself out of it within five minutes. XD
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I remember reading somewhere that for good flow you should always try to have each speech bubble below and/or to the right of the previous one. Which for left-to-right languages makes total sense.
Haha, yeah. I would pay to see you dick around on a chair like that and throw yourself off. :D
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As long as you pay for the cast on my broken elbow, no problems IT WOULD BE FUN :D
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Let's do it. :V
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*likes muchly*
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I… like the idea of possibly spawning something longer from this. :O I'm definitely going to have a think about it.
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Oh god glass. It wasn't too long ago I discovered how to get the sunlight to go through the glass. And I've been using that renderer for over two years.
I put a fair bit of thought into them most of the time and that seems to have paid off. :D
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