Comments | tf_rare_pairing: Slingshot/Breakdown

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Slingshot/Breakdown

Aug 31, 2008 19:59

Title: Comfort

Author: tanta_greenDisclaimer: Transformers is obviously not mine and belongs to Hasbro etc ( Read more... )

slingshot, rated: pg 13/t, author: tanta_green, breakdown, continuity: g1

Comments 6

mmouse15 September 1 2008, 01:58:38 UTC

Cute pairing! I like how caring Slings is, and how broken Breakdown seems and how he takes the comfort Slingshot offers.

You made me hurt when you described how painful it was to form Menasor. Nice writing, that.

tanta_green September 4 2008, 06:18:32 UTC

Thanks. I hope it was hurting in a good way. :) I'm glad you liked it though.

mmouse15 September 4 2008, 15:04:33 UTC

Yes, it was in a good way. I really like when authors can make you feel the emotions of the characters since it really helps with the suspension of belief and pulls me further into the story and you succeeded brilliantly. I hope you write more, you're really good.

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Re: Requester here~! tanta_green September 4 2008, 06:19:43 UTC

You're welcome. I'm glad you liked it. I've never really paid all that much attention to the Aerialbots or Stunticons before, so it was really interesting to work it all out.

tainry September 1 2008, 21:29:06 UTC

Awwww and ow. Poor Breakdown! O.O And Slingshot being such a dear. <3333
Very nice fic!

tanta_green September 4 2008, 06:20:14 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.