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challenge response: downfall

May 16, 2010 23:05

Title: Downfall ( Read more... )

challenge: may 2010 missing you, rated: pg 13/t, ultra magnus, author: synaltern, continuity: g1, jazz, prowl

Comments 13

niyazi_a May 17 2010, 03:07:59 UTC

author tag made. You are aware you've cut pasted this entry header and text twice into this entry?

Never mind! Great entry, btw! ^___^

mmouse15 May 17 2010, 03:19:59 UTC

Thanks for taking care of details, Antepathy! *hugs*

synaltern May 17 2010, 04:50:36 UTC

Thanks. :)

killer_rip May 17 2010, 04:39:52 UTC

*Gulps and wipes a tear away* Enough said I think. Gorgeous writing.

synaltern May 17 2010, 11:57:04 UTC

Ah the angst! *insert evil laughter*

...that's probably among the best compliments - strong emotional response. Thanks.

bluebirdsoaring May 17 2010, 04:45:02 UTC

I think this is a very interesting story...I've never seen the pairing, and I really like it!!!

synaltern May 17 2010, 11:55:13 UTC

I never saw it before, either, but Prowl got a finger in my brain and turned down every other potential partner. I kinda like it now myself. They fit.

__wilderness__ May 17 2010, 11:35:36 UTC

This... is awesome. An interesting pairing certainly, and I just love the angst. I only wish there had been a happy ending... :)

synaltern May 17 2010, 11:53:32 UTC

Thanks! ^^

I was going for bittersweet, at least. That last section - the conversation between UM and Jazz - was practically a last minute addition. So, maybe...

:)

eerian_sadow May 17 2010, 21:14:36 UTC

oh, darling. this was amazing. heart wrenching in just the right ways.

synaltern May 17 2010, 21:21:20 UTC

I like heart wrenching! ^^ Good to know it did what it was supposed to.