This was pretty funny. Your comments about Prowl were spot on--his suddenly turning traitor is the thing that confuses me the most about this story. The characterizations, they kill me!
It really does need an LJ-cut though. If spelling it is too difficult, try using the Rich Text format--you highlight the text you want under a cut, find the LJ cut button, and type in what you want the text of the cut to say! The text that goes under a cut will show up in grey.
Prowl is joining the Deceptions over his friends punching an evil warlord, and he probably only joined the Autobots because Warpath was about to chest-bump him to death if he said other wise, what makes you think he's sure about anything?
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It really does need an LJ-cut though. If spelling it is too difficult, try using the Rich Text format--you highlight the text you want under a cut, find the LJ cut button, and type in what you want the text of the cut to say! The text that goes under a cut will show up in grey.
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Oh! ok lets see if i can test it out on this, my dyslexia has defeated many a spell check, but lets not give up hope :D
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I splorfled.
XD
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