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lurkerlynne in tf80sfun

Kite Strings Ch 19. Finally!

Feb 10, 2009 00:52

My apologies for the late post; the damn thing wouldn't format properly, then I my internet went wonky. DD:

Title: This Means War ( Read more... )

fan fiction: work in progress, timeline: g1, prowl, original character, rodimus prime, fan fiction: au, starscream, jetfire/skyfire, jazz

Comments 6

cmdrtekk February 10 2009, 18:18:38 UTC

Well paced and well thought out chapter. The perfect amount of information and detail at the right times as we followed the entire plot line from start to finish.

Thanks for sharing. (Have missed this.)

lurkerlynne February 11 2009, 02:56:06 UTC

Thanks. ^_^

catraven February 10 2009, 20:37:06 UTC

Earlier today, I was noting to myself that I was missing this series. How wonderful that I should come into LJ and find this! Perfect!:D

Starscream and Optronix = love for me. :D Poor Op was so grumpy in this one! I wanna snuggle him and scold the twins.

Thanks, and welcome back!

lurkerlynne February 11 2009, 02:57:53 UTC

Oh, Optronix got his snuggles. Don't worry about that. :D

And the twins got more than just a scolding. ::eg::

caravanka February 10 2009, 21:07:05 UTC

Thank you ))) Loved all these changing perspectives. And yay for the big chapter (not that I mind smaller ones).

lurkerlynne February 11 2009, 02:59:17 UTC

I love this changing POV thing. It's fun to crawl into the heads of different mechs. Doesn't work for all that may stories but when it does.. Whee!