Comments | tf80sfun: fic: Shattered 2 of 2 (G1)

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fic: Shattered 2 of 2 (G1) - PG13

Dec 08, 2008 18:52

Title: Shattered (2 of 2)
Rating: PG 13
Warnings: Character death
Characters: Slingshot, Fireflight, Smokescreen
Universe: G1, post season two
Summary: It was their greatest fear, losing a gestalt-mate... but they never thought it could actually happen.
Part 1

( Click for the second batch of angst )

slingshot, timeline: g1, fireflight, fan fiction: drama, smokescreen

Comments 4

jigsaws231 December 9 2008, 05:28:12 UTC

*sad, but hopeful* The two left alive are an interesting set - almost the polar opposites of each other.

uftaki December 9 2008, 06:44:19 UTC

;____; So sad.... so heartbreakingly sad... That tiny little bit of hope at the end is a good note to land on, rather than leaving the story off as completely depressive... It really tugs on your heartstrings. Poor Flight; so broken and withdrawn. Poor Sling; hurting so much, yet so tender towards Flight... *hugs them both* Beautifully sad story, here.

lapinporokoira December 9 2008, 19:25:59 UTC

I am so happy this is being continued the dynamics of Slingshot and Fireflight are an opportunity not to miss. Especially in light of their tragic loss. :(

misao_cg December 10 2008, 22:58:27 UTC

;_; You're making me cry with this fic. ó_ò BUT, and here comes the important part, even when your fic is SAD, ANGST AND *SAD*... o.o It's, at the same time, AMAZING! You're writing this so good, that I could hug you!: óOò I want to cuddle Slingshot and Fireflight so BAD, that my arms hurts!

Keep the good work coming! I'm looking forward for more. Ó_ò Is Fireflight going to be ok someday? ú_ù At least he is responding to his brother...

... ;_; I'll go to that corner to have an awful emo moment. I need to get this out of my system.

YOU'RE GREAT. YOU ROCK! Here, ò.o COOKIE!! YOURS!! EAT IT!! ^O^

o.o and please, give this energon-cookie jar to Slingshot and Fireflight for me? ó__ò

TAKE CARE!!

Misao-CG