fic: Ties that Bind (G1) - R

May 31, 2008 15:26


Title: Ties that Bind
Warning: Smexing
Pairings: Ultra Magnus/Rodimus Prime/Springer
Universe: G1
Summary: Rodimus Prime is having trouble adjusting to his new position, but Ultra Magnus is there to help. Unfortunately, Springer gets the wrong impression. Written for
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timeline: g1, ultra magnus, springer, rodimus prime, fan fiction: adult

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kyra_neko_rei June 1 2008, 00:46:34 UTC
Hahhahahahahaha!! Awesome!

Springer didn't answer for a long moment. “I spoke to Ultra Magnus,” he said finally.

Rodimus cocked his head. “'Spoke'?” he repeated dubiously.

“Alright, so I might have punched him,” Springer admitted, looking sheepish.

Best line evar!

Ultra Magnus crossed his arms, expression impassive.

“What the slag do you want?” Springer demanded.

“My room back?” Ultra Magnus suggested mildly. “You're in my quarters.”

New best line evar!

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splendidshadows June 1 2008, 01:31:39 UTC
“Just leave it,” he repeated, softer. Then he turned and staked out.

Growling, Ultra Magnus pulled him closer, sliding a hand under Springer's canopy to just barely brush against the rotor assembly hid underneath.

Just two tiny mistakes I saw. ;)

*gibbers incoherently* Graaaaah, that was hot. XD This is now a new OT3 for me! Being Prime does have its perks. :D

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casusfere June 1 2008, 01:46:04 UTC
*headdesk* Every single time... *scurries off to fix*

^.^ Adding Springer makes everything hotter.

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tainry June 1 2008, 01:46:12 UTC
“Alright, so I might have punched him,” Springer admitted, looking sheepish.
BWAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!

“My room back?” Ultra Magnus suggested mildly. “You're in my quarters.”
There was an awkward pause.
ROFFLE again!!!! Oh dear. ^^;;; Glad I wasn't drinking anything when I hit that part. XD

This? Is very impressive. Right from the get-go. Totally makes sense. Roddy does not handle his brief stint as Prime well, poor duck. And Magnus is clever and intelligent. Well done!!!!!
::applausesauce::

And then. It gets seventeen kinds of HOT!!!!!!
::gurgles and fans self::
Threesomes are really, I... just... Yeah. Pants. Happy.
::swoon::

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mmouse15 June 1 2008, 04:33:03 UTC
Guh.

best I can do at coherency after brain melt from hawtness

Gots to tell n-f-w about this one...

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ex_naggingf June 1 2008, 05:36:16 UTC
My OT3!!! Best story about them EVER.

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primusatemyleg June 1 2008, 05:57:06 UTC
Mind=blown
Pants=in the ionosphere

Gods I loved the start (that blew my mind), the middle and then the sandwich at the end(That blasted my pants)

This gets saved to my phone so I can read it again anywhere.

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