Fic: That Still Small Voice: Chapter Five

[lady_oneiros]

Title: That Still Small Voice
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.

Summary: Sam has been pulled deeper into the conflict than anyone realized.

Author’s Note: Sorry for the shortness of the chapter…I just could not drag it out any further! Also, this

Comments

[okami_myrrhibis]

Hmmm -some RatchetJack? yay!!! Not that I don't mind RatchetHide, but the "original" Ratchet pairing is still one of my faves.

Great job - I'm really enjoying the series.

[lady_oneiros]

Yay! Thank you! I'm glad you like it. And I've decided that I really like writing Wheeljack...I'm not sure if I have him completely correct, but the dialogue between him and Ratchet came really easily. A good sign? Thanks again!

[calger459]

In all seriousness, this didn't feel short at all! You have so much intricate character work going on in here, it's amazing :D I'm very interested to see how things play out between Bee and Sam, and it's awesome to have Wheeljack ^_^ I loved his scene with Ratchet, very revealing. Great job!

[lady_oneiros]

Thanks! ^_^ I'm really glad you liked my character work in this chapter--it's always the part of my writing that I worry about most. Bee and Sam are fun to work with, and with this chapter I have decided so is Wheeljack. XD His scene with Ratchet just kind of fell out on its own, which I almost never experience. Usually I must fight and kick and scream to make words come out. Thank you!

[anonymous]

I love this story! :] It's just so well-written. Jealous much, Bumblebee? LOL. XD You've really succeed in capturing the characters. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[animedarkside]

I love this story! :] It's just so well-written. Jealous much, Bumblebee? LOL. XD You've really succeed in capturing the characters. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[lady_oneiros]

*blush* Thank ya very much! XD I'm glad you like it so much. And yes, poor jealous Bumblebee...but what fun would it be NOT to torture him? ~_^ My characters suffer for my art for me. I'm glad you feel that I've captured the characters. As I've said before, it's one of my biggest concerns when writing. I'll try to have the next chapter up as soon as I can!

[ladynaberrie]

I like it.

[lady_oneiros]

Thank ya! XD