fixit fic epilogue

[tainry]

Title: Course Correction - Epilogue
Author: tainry
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money.
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing(s): Optimus, ensemble; Optimus/Ironhide, Optimus/Bumblebee, poly cuddles
Warnings: SPOILERS FOR AoE! PnP, sparks, m/m, mpreg-ish, angst, spawning
Summary: Three centuries after the Battle of Hong Kong, the remnants of Cybertron’s population

Comments

[playswithworms]

EEEEE HEEE HEE HEE!!! Oh wonderful, wonderful! *spins around*

Ok, off to eat some supper and do all the things, back later with more squee!!
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[tainry]

::Grooting:: ;D

[playswithworms]

Moar squee!

I love the description of the city, with the windy roads and two micro suns, and all the layers of protection to provide a safe spawning place so Optimus doesn't get twitchy. Good to know what happened to the rescued sparks, too - touchy feely, yeah, after so long as disembodied sparks, I bet! The image of Prowl and Blue glomping and clinging, aww <3

Optimus isn't literally irresistible, lol, just figuratively? Because heck, who'd want to resist! I like the idea of him having to put some contemplative prep time into getting all the systems going before all the Contributory fun ^^

Aah, Drift has a new thing these days, does he? XD

*sporfle* Aw, Opt being totally preoccupied by his new clutch is the most adorable thing ever <3

Ratchet needed to sit down. He might as well, since clearly he wasn’t going to get any rest for the next several thousand years. Poor Ratchet! 31 for a first clutch! *rolls about giggling* Hope Optimus didn't overdo it and hurt himself though. Did he end up with a new Primelet

[tainry]

:DDD
SnuggleBots!
Forgetting to give people a choice is a mistake he tries to correct... ^^;
Drift is...drifty... ;D <3
He's so excited to be egg-momdad!
Poor Ratchet, yes. OP is an overachiever, but he's fine, and there is, I'm sure, a Primelet in that batch, just in case. Whether they can tell which one it is until second instar? Dunno. ;D
LOL! He has to go right to the internet for bras. ::nods::
Yaaaay! That all was fun to write! Weird enough to freak Barricade out was what I was aiming at.... :D
Yes yes! And humming! And then once they hatch there will be clining en masse and there he goes with mobility issues again... XD
Eeeheehee! ::more Grooting!:: <333

[tainry]

Heee, thankee! :D

Wow

[missmaryr]

Lovely story!

Re: Wow

[tainry]

Thank you! :D

[mmouse15]

Prime was preeeetty darn sexy

Always. Prime is ALWAYS sexy. Especially when he's cuddling with all the contributers to his clutch.. The description of Bee's time with him was gorgeous and sexy.

I also loved the descriptions of the city - it sounds so beautiful.

Ah, the spawning - lovely, lovely descriptions and so lovely and alien. I loved it.

I especially loved the connection between Ratchet and Ironhide, and how it's still there after all they've been through.

Loved this, Tainry!

[tainry]

Heehee! Yes he is!
Thankee kindly!
I've been hoping my description of both stages of spawning fit neatly enough into the things Playswithworms has written to inspire her to write more... ::sneaky look:: ;D
Yaaay! o^_______________^o
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[femme4jack]

I haven't had time to make a decent comment (have had the page open for days and days), but I just want to pop by and say this made me deliriously happy on every level. And I think Optimus is going to end up sitting on those eggs.

[tainry]

Aw, no worries! ::pets::
Hooray! Bwahaha, well the eggs are hung on the walls, but in three years the hatchies will DEFINITELY be sitting on him! \o/
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