Title: Borealis 73/91: How Can I Keep From Singing - Part III
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tainryDisclaimer: Not mine, no money.
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing(s): Ensemble
Warnings: Robot snuggles, the Sec Def has a potty mouth.
Summary: Wherein Borealis teaches the new jets a dance; Raze returns; robots fight over Earth; Optimus spends some time on the floor; and Elita
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It's absolutely amazing, Tainry. The worldbuilding, the reimagining of the characters (especially Prowl and Perceptor, I think. Yes.), the whole everything. Your OCs are fantastic. I'm worried sick about Countermeasure/Mez now |D
One of my absolute favorite things, however, are the timespans. They're all scaled up to match the lifetime of a species that lives a ridiculously long amount of time, but without completely dwarfing the humans (MIIIILESSSS).
I'd say more, but I want to say things about everything and that's a lot of things to say. I don't think the comment limit would allow it.
I can't wait for the next installment <3
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Huzzah! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! <333
Thank you, thank you! I'm having so much fun; the worldbuilding and everything, the characters...they really just make me so happy, and I'm happy others want to share, too!
Hee! The timespans will start to get longer, in a few chapters. And then at the end they get REALLY long. ;D
Next chapter will be in December, as I'm working on this for NaNoWriMo. ;D
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But, with all the NaNo, etc. I haven't been back to leave a proper review on this one so I shall apply squee in order:
SQEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Aw, lots more Bluestreak kids? :D <3 And love Beachcomber laughing at being the progenitor of these great enormous Albatross-jets XD
Canted angles in architecture are very much the in thing right now, yes, I think I remember reading that somewhere...*sporfle*
Love the image of the young jets hardening their armor, like jet breads, baking to a nicely crunchy crusts. And then the dancing, oh golly XD For two hours! No wonder Ironhide was ready to send the troops! *still sporfling*
Erk, and then back to reality, after the fun memory. (Fly casual - hee!)
Raze! :D
God, he wanted to hug that city. Telling her to “go kick their asses, sweetheart,” wasn’t exactly protocol, though
EEEEEEEEEEEEHEEHEE!!! <333333333333333333333333333 Very huggable kickass cities, ftw ( ... )
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I think I need to make a new/different kind of listing for the kids, by each progenitor, so when I rattle off grandkids I don't forget any. ^^;
Snerk! ;D
JET BREADS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is fantastic.
I wouldn't recommend becoming one of Jhiaxus' experiments, no. o.o
HEEHEE!!! <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
Yeah, there's just...something about Vector/Ops snuggles. 8D <3333333333
Ah! I hadn't thought of it that way, but it makes sense. o.o I just figured they were normally so connected it would be a Very Bad Thing. And Flight just couldn't stand it, poor duck. <3
LOL, with friends like Jazz........ ::runs::
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HA, YOU SEE WHAT HAPPENS, THOUGH? I GO FOR A TEENSY SENTENCE OF DESCRIPTION AND NEXT THING I KNOW I'VE BEEN SURFING NASA OBSERVATORY AND APOD SITES FOR AN HOUR!!! XDDD Sigh.
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