Comments | tf2007fun: [fic]s Gettin' groovy

darknessdivine in tf2007fun

[fic]s Gettin' groovy

Mar 17, 2011 17:53

These are unbeta'd, so if you spot something all ahoo, please let me know so I can fix it. :3 Concrit is gladly welcome and if anyone has any prompts? I'm on 12 hr shifts right now, and there won't be any work for my shop until the middle of next week. I need things to ramble about with these guys.

Title: Autobotus Interruptus
Rating: M
Characters ( Read more... )

mikaela banes, sarah lennox, ironhide, will lennox, drabble, fanfiction 2011 (spring), rated r, lennox family, poster: darknessdivine, crack

Comments 12

zuzeca March 18 2011, 01:23:15 UTC

Only thing I noticed was an quotation mark typo here:

“I- Sam, he and- Well.“

Of course that could be because I was too busy laughing my ass off. These are great. XD

darknessdivine March 18 2011, 01:32:27 UTC

Actually, I misread your comment. Can you explain a little more? XD

And thank you! The Girl Talk one was giving me fits, I was worried it was subpar compared to the others.

zuzeca March 18 2011, 02:51:57 UTC

Sure thing. Actually, all I meant was it looked like you'd put in a beginning quotation mark instead of an ending one, so it was slanted backwards I guess? Maybe it's my computer.

Girl Talk was awesome, Voyeur Ironhide was glorious. :D

darknessdivine March 18 2011, 05:46:15 UTC

Oh. D: Huh, that is really weird, I never really paid attention to which way they faced because the comp did that for me, lol.

Hide will forever and always say that Ratchet bullied him to do it for scientific purposes, but really he just wanted to see two humans get it on without the silly porn plots and bad music.

quidamling March 18 2011, 04:16:23 UTC

These are a lot of fun. I must admit I love the idea of Sarah being even more bad-ass than her hubby. Fantastic!

darknessdivine March 18 2011, 05:42:57 UTC

Thank you. <3 I like bad-ass Sarahs, it's just so much fun to write a housewife who can kick your ass six ways to Sunday and then finish cooking breakfast.

femme4jack March 18 2011, 08:01:58 UTC

Loved every last word, but especially this:

“Is it good, at least?”

From the low, sultry chuckle she receives, yes, yes it is.

*snickers*

darknessdivine March 19 2011, 04:52:48 UTC

Autobots: Worlds biggest vibrators.

tainry March 20 2011, 05:27:43 UTC

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHA! Awesome. Go Sarah!!!

darknessdivine March 20 2011, 05:56:05 UTC

Your icon; so apt.

Thank you~!

ext_210694 March 26 2011, 21:45:31 UTC

These are fun! Love the second one in particular.

“Something’s bugging you, and it could compromise our team’s success.”

Best excuse for gossiping ever!

“Is it good, at least?”

From the low, sultry chuckle she receives, yes, yes it is.

...snickering madly. PERFECT ending!

At least it sounds quiet on their section of the field for now, though it’s loud where Nina is allowed to play with her modified paint-guns, and if there’s anyone Sarah doesn’t want to go up against it’s the woman who can match Wheeljack for sheer genius and penchant for explosions.

Any chance there might be more on Nina and Wheeljack? For some reason, I'm visualizing Jasika Nicole (plays Astrid on "Fringe") as Nina, and her bitching out Wheeljack in the messy aftermath of an explosion... (Unfortunately, whichever muse supplied that image has hit the equivalent of the dead-letter office, since I don't write fiction. But if it sparks any ideas, I'm happy to pass it on!)

darknessdivine March 26 2011, 22:17:47 UTC

Eee, thank you! ♥ Sarah was spec ops, she knows many different ways to interrogate someone. :D

Nina's part of another story that I've been working off and on for a few years now- it doesn't feature Wheeljack at all, but I think they'd get along great if I were to introduce them to it. Nina is the name I gave Dr. Harding from the original series (she designs a super awesome energy collecting satellite, which Megatron tries to steal via mind controlling the Autobots). XD My mental image of Diana actually looks a lot like Jasika Nicole, though!