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Fic: Malum In Se - Wrong In Itself

Jun 15, 2010 20:07

TITLE: Malum In Se - Wrong In Itself
SERIES: Imperfection Deviation - Off Balance
AUTHOR: Macx
RATING: PG-13
DISCLAIMER: None of the characters belong to me, sadly. They are owned by people with a lot more money :)
FEEDBACK: Loved
For odd_stick, who wanted the ‘first time’

Prior fics in the Off Balance series:

Wrong

Awkward

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scavenger, poster: macx_larabee, sideswipe, fanfiction 2010 (spring), rated pg-13

Comments 8

Malum In Se - Wrong In Itself gatekat June 15 2010, 18:39:07 UTC

A fascinating pairing that you're doing a very good job of writing the evolution and reasoning behind it. I really like your take on Sides and the twin-bond.

Re: Malum In Se - Wrong In Itself macx_larabee June 15 2010, 19:42:46 UTC

*bows* Thank you! Glad you enjoy it!

darkdanc3r June 15 2010, 19:33:26 UTC

Oh SIDESWIPE...

This is definitely different... but I kind of like it.

macx_larabee June 15 2010, 19:42:28 UTC

*chuckles* Thanks. Can't help it. It wants to get out. :)

odd_stick June 16 2010, 02:15:47 UTC

8D Yay!! And you just keep spoiling me rotten! *flails*

I love the way you describe Sideswipe's devastation in regards to his missing twin. His interaction's with Scavenger are very intriguing, and I like that he took the step to try and find a way to cope with his loss.

Ah, but that line, "Like an addict", has negative connotations...could this relationship turn sour, or possibly cause problems when/if Sunstreaker shows up? I know that in your 'verse, Sharing doesn't follow the same rules humans tend to give to relationships, but it will still be interesting to see what happens either way.

macx_larabee June 16 2010, 17:36:31 UTC

You're very welcome!

I thought about how it might have started and this seemed plausible enough. Poor Sideswipe has no idea what he wants, but he knows he does need something to ease the pain.

The addict part doesn't need to be negative, even if it has a negative ring to it. :)

And yes, I'm on a roll. More to come. I can't seem to stop writing drabbly ficlets about those two. Darn!

Small spoiler: it's 'when' Sunstreaker shows up.... no longer an if.

odd_stick June 16 2010, 17:48:44 UTC

To the addict part - Got it! I wasn't exactly sure how to take, hence the questions/speculations. Thanks for for implying otherwise! :)

Pfft. Like I'm going to complain that you can't stop writing these. I'm just eating them up as they come along! *slyly pushes more plotbunny food your way*

8DDD Oooh, I can't wait!

macx_larabee June 16 2010, 18:08:43 UTC

The bunnies are hyper as they are. They keep coming up with new things to write. Darn. I have to stop them from going into over-drive.