Pinch Hit: Fleeing the Astronomers

[wojelah]

Title: Fleeing the Astronomers
Characters/Pairings: Teyla/Bates
Rating: Somewhere around R or NC-17
Warnings: Spoilers through Suspicion
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Comments

[trobadora]

Oh my God. Oh my God. This is hot like burning! Teyla needing to let go, to react, to just feel - and Bates meeting her. God yes. One of the most fascinating aspects of their relationship was that with him, she did let go of her self-control - and this is where I always thought it should lead. Did you read my mind or something? I love this story to itty bitty pieces. You should write Teyla/Bates all the time! ;-)

P.S. Would you mind editing in the prompt(s) you used?

[wojelah]

Awesome. I'm so glad you liked it - it was a ton of fun to write. Clearly the teyla_bates radio frequencies are beaming straight into my cortex. :D

(And I wouldn't mind at all - edit away!)

[trobadora]

Clearly the teyla_bates radio frequencies are beaming straight into my cortex. :D

Yay! I hope they keep doing that. I'm so happy with this fest!

(And it's your post, so you'll have to edit. *g*)

[wojelah]

*headdesk* Yes. Duh. Done. :)

[shetiger]

Oh, this is fantastic! Exactly what I wanted, only more amazing than I could have dreamed up.

Neither one of them looks away, even as she feels him coil tighter beneath her,

*whimpers*

[wojelah]

Hee. I'm so glad! Thanks. :D

[_bettina_]

This was amazing and also very hot! Fantastic!

[wojelah]

Thank you so much!

[missyvortexdv]

Fantastic way to do this. Tense all the way through and yet it's not truly changing anything for them overall. Very interesting look into other sides of both of them and so nice to see them as opposition in a fight.

[wojelah]

Thanks - I don't actually see their fights being the thing that would force them to change towards each other, if that makes sense, so I'm glad that's how it read to you, too!

[ozsaur]

HOT! Beautifully written, too.

[wojelah]

Thank you so much - on both counts!