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Hero decides to Die (Part 1)

Jul 12, 2009 16:01

Title: Hero decides to Die (Two parts)
Type: One-shot
Genre: Angst
Summary: Because shit happens and sometimes you can't do anything about it.
Pairings: OT5, Yunjae, Yoosu, a little Jaemin, Hyunjae
Note: This one-shot is dedicated to my lost camera. Yes, that explains the angst. And sodapopcorn, for without her, there would be one less person i can turn to in ( Read more... )

g: dbsk, p: yunjae, # tragedy, p: yoosu, # angst, r: pg-13, p: jaemin

Comments 29

blurmeese July 13 2009, 07:11:38 UTC

I think under_an_oak already pointed out the grammar stuff so that aside.

Dying. Dying so hard, I love stories like this (...such a sadist, i know, stfu) with someone dying but still continuing to live with the band D: The suicide pact was a brilliant touch, Han to Kim. Urgh part 2 here I come~

textparade July 13 2009, 12:02:47 UTC

JO <3

where are the grammer errors lolllll.

THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH BB. (i really liked the suicide pact idea - feel like writing a fic solely on that but i think it might turn out weird. gah.)

and urm. IM A SADIST TOO. lol.

blurmeese July 13 2009, 12:06:11 UTC

:DD Jaejoong opens his eyes in shock and blinked a few times.

maybe "blinks"? In accordance with the present tense thing you've got going there akdjsnkj just little stuff like that, nothing a quick check over won't fix ♥

DO IT. THE POSSIBILITIES, OH~

textparade July 13 2009, 12:22:43 UTC

ooh. i see it.

LOLLLLLL.
JO IDK. ALL THE TIME SUPPOSEDLY MEANT FOR BRUSHING UP MY CHEMISTRY?

LOLOLLL.

unless we collab or you write it too