BEAUTY OF THE FORBIDDEN - 12 (2/2)/? - JONGHYUN X KIBUM

[tewki]

Title: Beauty of the Forbidden
Paring: Jonghyun/Kibum, Jonghyun/Jessica
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (PG-13)
Genre: AU, romance, angst, smut
Chapter: Chapter 12, part two: Remember
Warnings: Pervy stuff?
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine except from the plot.
Summary: Jonghyun is bored, Kibum is curious and lust is sinful

Comments

[phantomous]

Yes update! Been waiting! *Will be back later*

[phantomous]

I love how supportive Jinki is. Even though Kibum is being slutty I don't fault him for that. He gave his virginity away to someone who couldnt or wouldnt love him the why he deserved so he was bound to act out somehow.

And Im starting to miss Jonghyun. Will he be in the next chapter?

I cant wait until the next update!

[tewki]

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'll try updating the next chapter ASAP! ♥

[blinglocket]

OMG YES /going to read/

[blinglocket]

Why so small? ;________; jbdbjejkn,;hjs GOD, I'VE BEEN STALKING YOUR JOURNAL THE WHOLE WEEK
I've read this a thousand times, I think, and I've read everything again now that you said that there were some changes and hbshbs still can't believe you'll finish this ♥ /gives hearts/ /gives cookies/ /gives you my soul/
Their situation is still heartbeeaking but, oh well, I guess it can't be helped since Jonghyun was the biggest asshole and just screwed everything up ;____; i'm already looking forward to they meeting again, tho
Kibum, poor bb, stop doing this to yourself :(
Will you post the next chapter next week? Huuh? :3 plsssss

[tewki]

SORRY! ;A; Next chapter will be longer, I promise~ ü

/*TAKES HEARTS AND COOKIES BUT NOT YOUR SOUL CAUSE I WOULDN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH IT! D:*/

I don't know if the next chapter will be up next week, I don't think so with all my exams coming up. But I promise I'll update ASAP! Thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥

[bonbonyuri]

Hey there~

Actually I had planned to comment on part one, but since I kinda forgot to do so, I'm commenting on part two instead! ^^
I think it's maybe a bit short, but still very nice! I found the part where Kibum was lighting the candle and thinking about his grandmother to be very touching. A couple of years ago one of my close relatives died so I could somehow relate to this scene.
Thanks for updating, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

PS: Do you still need a beta reader? I'm not a native speaker, but I'm quite fluent in English. I'm pretty sure there are people out there who are more suitable for this job than I am, but if you haven't found anyone yet, I'd be willing to do it c:

[tewki]

I'm glad you liked the chapter, despite its lenght! xD Thank you for reading and commenting~ ♥

Oh woah, I'd gladly accept your offer! I really appreciate it, thank you very much! Would you be interested to only check this fic or other stuff I write as well?

[bonbonyuri]

I'm mainly interested in this story, but other jongkey fics would be fine, too. ^^
Shall we add each other on skype? If so, just pm me your skypename and I'll add you!

[tewki]

Alright and again, thank you~!

[keygasmic]

Silly kibum!
I hope you continue to update quickly (:

[tewki]

I'll make sure to update ASAP! Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

[tewki]

I'm starting to fall in love with Jinki in this fic *kidnaps* ;-;

...*taking cookies and pancakes cause I'm greedy like that and hnnnggggggpancakes :F*

I'm glad you liked the chapter :3
Thank you very much for reading and commenting! ♥