Oz drabble

Jul 07, 2004 09:26

Dessert_First said to put this up, and I usually do what she suggests. I'm that way, you know. Suggestible.
In the voidness of reality ( Read more... )

aspects of oz

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glossing July 7 2004, 08:04:43 UTC
Oh! This is lovely, very calm and very sad. All the contrasts between how Oz seems and how he feels.

The only thing I'd quibble with is Oz feeling "ownership" of Devon...it works here, so my question's a larger-scale one, about whether it's Oz-like to feel like that.

Just wonderful.

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tesla321 July 7 2004, 09:10:37 UTC
I think there's a whole head flash thing where Oz reads too many Buddhist aphorisms at once and starts thinking that jealousy or desire put a claim of ownership on the loved one.

Thanks for reading!

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nwhepcat July 7 2004, 10:00:54 UTC
Oh, what a nice (sad) slice of Ozness. Thank you!

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tesla321 July 7 2004, 10:59:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm trying to lure Dessert_First out to play....

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dessert_first July 7 2004, 17:42:57 UTC
::cracks whip::

::is immensely pleased at the resulting compliance::

Which totally explained the chains in the spare room, but at the time, he'd just thought he'd discovered some sad, middle-aged kink.

Dude, I heart this line. Love how you've got the pain and the anger and then with the funny. Loved the options Oz is considering for doing away with his useful brain parts.

Consider me lured.

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tesla321 July 7 2004, 17:49:39 UTC
My evil plan works!

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dessert_first July 7 2004, 18:24:23 UTC
You bring the magic that is Oz and some chips and dip, I'll bring the social awkwardness and innapropriately timed humor as defense mechanism. It'll be a par-tay!

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tesla321 July 7 2004, 18:29:03 UTC
I've snagged the slushies from Gloss!

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