New S Curve

Mar 17, 2008 23:48

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the s curve, cordelia

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cinnamongirl2 March 18 2008, 23:00:24 UTC
I don't know where this is headed, but that's ok just happy to be along for the ride.

Seriously I get so excited to see an update from you.

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tesla321 March 19 2008, 02:02:53 UTC
Good! I wanna take it on some twists and turns.

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angelsrebellion March 19 2008, 00:14:06 UTC
Now I'm just pissed. Xander and Willow? Even when I was watching them go at it on Buffy I was ewww. But I do like the idea of Angel going out with someone new (as long as it's just to make Xander jealous, of course...>.>) Can't wait till the next update, bai!

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tesla321 March 19 2008, 02:02:21 UTC
Oh, you're going to be seriously wrung out! As I said upstream, Xander makes lots of minor mistakes, constantly. But when Angel loses it, he really screws up.

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samsom March 19 2008, 03:33:29 UTC
Okay.

Okay.

Nice twist on the Willow/Xander cheatage - and thanks for not impaling Angel on a rebar as a result. It's a bit surprising to see Xander discovering the other side of his bi side but it's strangely hot too.

Loved Cordelia's logic and the fact that she's still the one to call things as they are.

I don't like that Xander broke up with Angel over something Angel obviously loves but I can't help but think he actually did the right thing. If he can't live with it....he should go. As long as this isn't some kind of "I'm holding my breath until you quit the force" deal. I also hope Angel isn't sitting at home watching Cops while Xander gets his bi side on. *raises eyebrows*

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tesla321 March 19 2008, 03:39:21 UTC
Far, far, from it. Angel is hitting the Irish whisky. Very wrong things happen when Angel drinks and broods.

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makd March 19 2008, 07:05:27 UTC
Such a neat update! I love the way you led us into this world, lulled us into thinking it was stable, then whoosh! up-ended it and now it's like a new story, but not...

I love this line: “Damn straight,” Jessica said. “Knowing that was waiting for me was the only thing that got me through the labor. That, and drugs.” It's hard not to laugh out loud, even if it is after 3:00 a.m.

Love the imagery of Angel listening to Patsy Cline. Very sly, that Cordy; very sly.

The last line...makes me think that I know who Angel's going to be looking at next....

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asm613 February 11 2011, 19:59:40 UTC
well at least i was right about this being your version of evil-vamps xander and willow. at least that's what you made it seem like with the leather corsette.
and willow is right- she and xander aren't good enough for angel and tara. and congratulations- just when you make me think i couldn't possibly hate xander harris any more than i already do- you go and make me hate him more. xander didn't realize he was getting a cop---what about all the prep he had while angel was going to the academy or all the months he's been a cop already---what a fuck head. the only happy ending i want to read about now is xander harris dying a horrible and painful death- maybe willow blowing him while they're driving- and xander gets in a car accident- when they find the 2 dead bodies in the car- willow has bitten off xander's penis and it's stil in her mouth- and xander was wide awake and still alive when it was bitten off.

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