Comments | tesla321: Fic: "Knot For Our Heart" part 20

tesla321

Fic: "Knot For Our Heart" part 20

Nov 11, 2007 19:42

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firefly, knot for our heart

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tesla321 November 12 2007, 05:53:16 UTC

I started writing it because I was cold, and because I watched more Nathan stuff. Which made me miss Mal!

makd November 12 2007, 05:33:16 UTC

Delightful; just perfect for a cold day here on LI. I find it interesting - Inarra's watching, studying Mal and River. She watches because she doesn't understand, I think. How did she lose her luster in his heart? I think that's what she's wondering. Maybe a tad jealous, too.

'Splainy, please: "I know," River said. "I'm again. completely in agreement." Is it a punctuation thing? or did I miss something?

tesla321 November 12 2007, 05:50:57 UTC

my bad, of course---I haven't decided to start doing blank verse....yet.

Anyway, I thought it would be just like Mal to think he's standing anonymously in a crowd, so he can be (for him) relaxed with River in public. And, that it would be like River to guard him from Inara's gaze, even when River would prefer to lay everything open and be done with the wondering. And rub it in a tad, because she's human.

marilynloren November 12 2007, 06:21:07 UTC

It's nice to see how relaxed Mal is when River is with him. He may not say it but he shows he loves her by doing little things. I wonder if Inara is still in denial after seeing that?

tesla321 November 12 2007, 06:24:57 UTC

I don't think it's denial as much as disbelief---she literally can't believe it. And, if you look back, Inara's not there to see them doing anything demonstrative. Or so I was intending!

crescentdreams November 12 2007, 06:27:15 UTC

I love the moments.
The tag of the shoes... Kaylee and Jayne... their comfort with each other... knowing it was Inara before you said it was Inara.
You write River beautifully.

tesla321 November 12 2007, 06:31:05 UTC

Thank you---I kept thinking that I was having too much fun writing all this, then I thought, "Hell, it's a hobby. It's supposed to be fun."

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tesla321 November 12 2007, 23:13:08 UTC

Well, you know what? I may just write this story ALL WINTER!

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It's all about Nathan... tesla321 November 12 2007, 23:26:33 UTC

See, it started with me getting the new edition of "Serenity", then seeing "Waitress", then seeing "Slither", then seeing Nathan guest on Ellen, then seeing the Outer Limits, then there was "Outing Riley", and I have "Waitress" on pre-order, then there's "White Noise 2" coming out in January...

I find him inspirational. Heh. And as long as someone's reading, I'll type merrily on.

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