Giving LJ-cut yet another try.

[terrific_tina]

Giving it yet another try. I'm actually proud of this fic for some reason...

Name: Granted
Fandom: SPD
Pairing: Bridge/Sky
Warning: Character Death!

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Disclaimer: Don’t own SPD.

A/N: Yet another request fic for Boxer Thief, cause she drew me another awesome Bridge/Sky pic! If you want the link, you can ask either her or me. Yes, I know I spoil her.

Comments

[lttledvl_writes]

It's good. I really like the first part. Good job with putting in the Ranger promotions.

A typo though...

Bridge couldn’t belie Sky had just said those words to him.

Should be 'believe' there, I'd guess that it got cut off somehow...

[terrific_tina]

Thanks! :)

Yeah, I noticed that stupid typo plenty of times... Ff.net habit I guess... no one ever comments on those! *goes to fix* Now stay right!

[welleg_fic]

Ditto what I said at ff.net. My story is coming along slowly. School's gotten in the way, unfortunately.

[terrific_tina]

Thanks! I hate school...

[shurifanstuffs]

Aww, that was sweet. :) One nitpick, though- Jack's last name is spelt Landors, with an o.

[terrific_tina]

Landors? Poo... I'll get that changed as soon as I can! I had a feeling I got it wrong... thanks!