Six Days to Crazy

Jan 09, 2012 02:17

Title: Six Days to Crazy
Character/Pairing: Reynolds x Maddy, with a dash of Lucas
Word Count: 2225
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warning: kidnapping? 
Spoiler Alert: none, if you've seen the finale, you're gold, but even still, I don't spoil anything really. 
Summary: Maddy goes missing and Mark is losing his grip. 
Beta Help: bella8876 and marvinetta
A/N: So, we've ( Read more... )

pairing::maddy/mark, authors: a-f, character: maddy shannon, character: mark reynolds, word count: 1000-4999, author: crystalkei, rating: pg-13

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marvinetta January 9 2012, 08:28:18 UTC
GO TO BED. But yay you posted! Great job!

I'm slowly being converted to this pairing.

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crystalkei January 9 2012, 18:23:07 UTC
So what you're saying is it's not okay for me to stay up until 2:30am to post fic? Geez. And remember the part where you were up? Yeah. :P

You know what i have to say to you?


... )

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bellakitse January 9 2012, 16:38:15 UTC
You say troll i say encourage

I love it, like I said I never though Mark holding a gun to her would be possible and you made it possible and heartbreaking.

You got Lucas's crazy down, i can see him all deranged glint in his eye.

“Don’t leave me,” she says and it pulls something in him.

“I’m so sorry,” he replies as she throws herself into his arms. Relief floods him but then guilt. “I was supposed to protect you.”

This *sniff* heartbreaking.

but this part
“You sure throw a lot of bitch fits, though,” LMAO!

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crystalkei January 9 2012, 18:24:59 UTC
Thank you for "encouraging" me. ;)

And if Terra Nova shits on women, I'm beginning to see it does the same to some of it's male characters (Lucas, Josh) perhaps I should change my essay to "why terra nova shits on ALL it's characters." XD Because the men and the bitch fits need to stop.

Glad you liked it, bb!

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bellakitse January 9 2012, 18:29:33 UTC
Oh yeah TN craps on all it's characters, the boys too, Lucas stands out the most, they made him a raving lunatic who willing to destroy the world and why? Cause he has daddy issues.

His motivation is faulty and makes him a petulant child instead of a misguided genius which is what they should have gone with.

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crystalkei January 9 2012, 18:37:42 UTC
It's so painful how cartoonish he became. But as per usual, plot driven instead of character driven. But that's how you get viewers. If someone loves the characters, they'll stick around for whatever crazy bits you've got. They need to really work on making the characters more relatable and real and then hopefully they can attract more positive reviews (every review claims to not remember anyone's name because they're all so "boring") and more viewers.

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scarletalpha January 9 2012, 18:18:37 UTC
Oh, Lucas being Lucas. What Terra Novan woman isn't he obsessed with? Jealous bastard. Cause they're all awesome. By which I mean, love the 'bitch fit' line.

And Mark being high on the stims and that whole process...powerful imagery.

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crystalkei January 9 2012, 18:26:39 UTC
Thank you! I was thinking of the BSG ep 33. It works, no? Or Kat's breakdown?

Lucas is a serious nut. Sexy, sure, but what did Marvi say? "The guy you want to bang and then slip some poison in his breakfast the next day."

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scarletalpha January 9 2012, 20:06:37 UTC
Then consider it a success because that is exactly what I was thinking of. Not that it's not a success otherwise or anything.

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Excellent writing! justomath January 19 2012, 18:01:26 UTC
I liked this a lot. It was intense, it was shocking, and it was a very creative plotline. I commend you. Well done!

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shadowlynx1977 April 21 2013, 17:23:14 UTC
EXCELENT story!
Offcourse Mark would never hurt Maddy but Lucas was still unsure and it threw him off a bit and lost his focus from Maddy!

Lucas is a sort off evil genious such people are good at playing the mind game and Lucas comes off as a really good player at that! but he made a misstake in underestimating Mark and why not "Mark is nothing than a loyal hound off Cmdr Taylor stupid and obedient"(from Lucas´s pov that is)!

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