Comments | terranovafanfic: As We Go (2/?)

morganel in terranovafanfic

As We Go (2/?)

Jan 02, 2012 13:51

Characters: Alicia Washington, Laura Reilly, Nathaniel Taylor, Mark Reynolds
Word Count: 1,893
Warning: Violence
Summary: Alicia Washington spars with Corporal Reilly, gets caught day dreaming, and gives the younger solider a little lesson about the importance of distractions.
A/N: 19 hours of no internet. I could have posted last night. Fight Scenes ( Read more... )

character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, author: morganel, pairing::alicia/reilly, pairing: f/f, word count: 1000-4999, rating: pg-13, character: others, character: mark reynolds

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:D Fantastic! ext_911897 January 2 2012, 19:20:12 UTC

Yay!! Despite the font being a butthead, it was still good ^.^ Now hurry up with chapter 3 chickie.

bellakitse January 2 2012, 19:20:54 UTC

I'm a huge fan of slash, femslash has to be special to have me interested, you have me interested. I have a soft spot for Reilly so i love reading more about her.

good job and i look forward to more.

i liked the way you described the sparring

morganel January 2 2012, 19:46:17 UTC

thanks the sparring was hard to write.
font's messed up sooorry

violetinstincts January 2 2012, 21:38:46 UTC

My my my getting sexy there at the end ( ... )

morganel January 3 2012, 00:07:42 UTC

I do love your comments :) Taylor suspects nothing. Sexy times are on the way.

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morganel January 3 2012, 03:14:46 UTC

Hahaha. I'd actually aimed to have the "For a moment there I thought you hadn't noticed me" be significant in the story...guess not. OH well, I'm writing my "eye fucking" scene now. updatatons shall be tonight or tomorrow.

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