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The Spark that Ignites [1/1]

Dec 15, 2011 18:51

Title: The Spark that Ignites
Ship: Skye/Carter
Genre: Romance/Drama
Word Count: 4322
Rated: Hard R
Warning: Sexual Situation
Spoilers: ‘Now you see me’ and bits of ‘Within’
Summary: Skye meets Lucas and Carter sneaks into Terra Nova to see her.
A/N: 4th installation of the ‘Beauty and the Beast’ series. Thanks to crystalkei for beta-ing and fangirling this chapter ( Read more... )

character: carter, authors: a-f, pairing: f/m, character: skye tate, word count: 1000-4999, rating: r, pairing::skye/carter, character: others, author: bellakitse, character: lucas taylor

Comments 7

crystalkei December 16 2011, 00:04:47 UTC

You know I love ALL of it. EVERY. DAMN. WORD. But I really like this bit:
“Yeah,” she breathes as she wraps her arms around his neck. “Because this is madness.”

bellakitse December 16 2011, 15:21:32 UTC

you're awesome, :)

marvinetta December 16 2011, 00:20:17 UTC

♥

Yay!!! So good. I'm so happy you're continuing with this series!!!

bellakitse December 16 2011, 15:22:14 UTC

thank you! so glad you like it :)

makesometime December 16 2011, 07:50:46 UTC

Ahhhh, I've been looking forward to this so much and you didn't disappoint! Excellent :D

bellakitse December 16 2011, 15:22:31 UTC

yay! <3

lynxlarabellows April 4 2012, 22:52:30 UTC

Everybody hates Lucas. Now trying to make me like him is where you might fail, because unlike Carter he irks me too much, although the scene with the two of them was written wonderfully. He shows more of his protectiveness and possessiveness against Lucas, which just makes that whole scene incredible and charged with tension.

Then he is so gentle with her afterwards and, then Carter is so tender with her mother that is just too sweet for words. I really liked their interaction, especially since he let Skye witness the moment. The whole scene with Tasha, Josh and Skye was absolutely awesome, especially his reaction to Maddy and Mark :D

And the ending, um… O.O Is it strange that I found it as equally sweet as I did intense? His line at the end, “We are so screwed, Princess,” really does sum it up quite nicely in both sensed of the word. Brilliant as usual, because that scene said it all without ever really saying anything <3 Love!